I dont think is wrong, I like it.
I would only recommend avoid using "we" since it is an essay. I also would add some proof to connect with your analysis of the article. maybe a quote that relates to what you're trying to convey.
but I like what you wrote, seems interesting :)
EXERCISE
Questions 1-5: Revise the following sentences so that the active voice replaces the passive
voice.
1. All of us were surprised to hear the views that were expressed by him.
2. At each new performance of the jazz band, the music was enjoyed by Pat even more.
3. Several different techniques for grafting can be employed by the gardener.
4. Only one person had not been persuaded by the rhetoric.
5. These improvements for bus riders were provided in part by Congress through a new program that
included two innovations: distribution of funds to localities and provision for annual increases to be
made through the coming six years.
Answer:
Active voice are :
1.
“All of us were surprised to hear the views that he expressed”
2.
“At each new performance of the jazz band, Pat enjoyed the music even more.”
3.
“The gardener can employ several different techniques for grafting.”
4.
“The rhetoric had not persuaded only one person.”
5.
''Congress provided these improvements for bus riders in part through a new program that included two innovations: distribution of funds to localities and provision for annual increases for six years.''
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Explanation:
1 काटती हूं
२ पीढ़ा बेलन। रोटी
३। थलना
४ छीलो
Answer:
कुछ और काम :1. मैं चाकू हूँ।
मैं सब्ज़ी काटती हूँ।
[tex]\begin{gathered} \end{gathered}[/tex]
2. हम चौकी और बेलन हैं।
हम रोटी बेलते हैं ।
[tex]\begin{gathered} \end{gathered}[/tex]
3. मैं चाय छलनी हूँ
मैं चाय छानती हूँ।
[tex]\begin{gathered} \end{gathered}[/tex]
4. मैं थाली हूँ।
मुझमें खाना खाओ।
[tex]\begin{gathered} \end{gathered}[/tex]
5. मैं छीलनी हूँ।
मुझसे छिलका उतारो।
————————————————For best effects, spray pesticide on plant leaves, flowers, and around the garden bed. Which way to rewrite this sentence would best correct its parallelism errors?
Answer:
Explanation:
In order for the sentence to not have parallelism errors it needs to have all three of the options the same. They all need to be nouns, gerunds, phrases, etc. The main thing is that they all share this similarity. Therefore with the sentence in the question the best way to get rid of these errors would be rewriting it to the following sentence.
"For best effects, spray pesticide around the garden bed, plant leaves, and flowers."
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Answer:
Connecting verbs.
Both phrases in front and behind the or is a verb,so therefore,it's Connecting verbs.
Read this paragraph
(1) Eliza and Brianna have been singing in their school chorus since they were in fourth grade.
(2) The girls always sing a duet at the school talent show, and they take turns singing the
national anthem before school sporting events. (3) Outside of school, she also sings in a choir
made up of young and old members of her community. (4) Both girls hope that they will be able
to continue singing for many more years.
Which sentence should be revised to correct a vague pronoun?
A. sentence 1
B. sentence 2
C. sentence 3
D. sentence 4
Answer:
C. sentence 3
Explanation:
'she' should be 'they' as there are two girls and so 'sings' should also be changed into 'sing'.
I hope this makes sense!! ^-^
The following question references the novel The Three Musketeers by Alexandre Dumas. How does D'Artagnan deceive Milady (Lady de Winter)? a. He convinces her to let him marry her servant girl. c. He hides in the closet and comes out to steal her jewelry. b. He befriends her in an attempt to spy on Cardinal Richelieu. d. He pretends to be the Comte de Wardes. Please select the best answer from the choices provided A B C D
Answer:
after a lot of researching and time I have figured out the answer is b
Explanation:
D'Artagnan deceives Milady as he pretends to be the Comte de Wardes.
What are the themes of The Three Musketeers by Alexandre Dumas?Dumas examines societal class hierarchies, love, ambition, and devotion throughout the entire book.
Milady is a "Cardinalist agent" and a "sinister villain". To get his vengeance, D'Artagnan uses Kitty to eavesdrop on Milady and the Comte's communication. Under the Comte's name, he forges a letter to her and requests a meeting at her home.
Hence, the correct option is D.
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9. Identify some common symbols in literature. Where can you look for symbols in the setting?
10. What is a misplaced modifier? How can you fix a sentence that features a misplaced modifier?
11. What is a dangling modifier? How can you fix a sentence that features a dangling modifier?
12. What are some benefits of multimedia presentations?
Answer:
9.) A symbol is anything that stands for, or represents, something else. In a story, a character, an action, an object, or an animal can be symbolic. Look for objects, characters, names etcetera
10.) A misplaced modifier is a word, phrase, or clause that is improperly separated from the word it modifies / describes. if u wanna fix it, place single word adjectives before the word u modify and adjective phrases or clauses right after the word u modify.
11.) A dangling modifier is a phrase or clause that is not clearly and logicaly related to the word or words it modifies. dis can be fixed by identifying the subject u want to modify, making sure it's present, and placing the modifier immediately before or after it in the sentence
Explanation:
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Which of these sections of the article highlights
the idea that Catalonia is not the only part of
Spain to have a ban against a tradition involving
bulls?
4. What could Beneatha's hair, Mama's plant, and "Eat your eggs!" symbolize?
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is "whoever heard the parrot" a phrase or clause
Answer:
Clause. It is a Clause
Explanation:
It is incomplete. Whoever heard the parrot.. what?
Answer:
it is a phrase
Explanation:
althrough i think its not done.
Please give me the correct answer.Only answer if you're very good at English.Please don't put a link to a website.
Answer:
I would say the last choice
Explanation:
Clearly the rhyme scheme is not the same throughout the poem. Therefore the poet is trying to display change.
How should sentence 4 be changed?
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Answer:
Thanks for the points!
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Which of the following would be a good hook for a personal essay?
Answer:
D
Explanation:
They all seem interesting which will make the reader want to know what will happen.
Have a nice day :D
Answer:
D. All of the above
Explanation:
There's nothing wrong with any of them
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Anna's frustration with her job is shown most clearly by her actions toward ______. O A. Alex OB. Jeff O C. Madeline O D. Nancy
Answer:
C. Madeline
Explanation:
Give 3 examples of evaluative questions you could ask about a text.
Answer:
What do you think about ___?
Why do you think ____?
How is ___ experience similar or different then yours?
Explanation:
Evaluative questions are just questions asked to make and defend judgements and choices
Discuss a time when you feel someone “sold out/took the easy way out” and how it made you feel.
Answer: It's frowned upon due to the fact it's usually associated with weakness, laziness, incompetency, foul play, etc. The fact of the matter is however that in real life working hard doesn't always mean you'll be rewarded for your efforts. Sometimes lazy people end up successful, sometimes intelligent hard workers don't make the cut. It depends on a multitude of different factors.
Explanation:
Rather than repeating how sorry he is for robs death in the letter to robs parents what does andy decide to do in the letter?
Answer:
Andy decides to write about the good times he spent with Rob and how special their friendship was.
Explanation:
This question is about "Tears of a Tiger" where we met Andy and the fateful day he was involved in a car accident with his friend Rob. The accident ended up killing Rob, but Andy survived and was very depressed by the death of his friend feeling guilty and unworthy.
Andy's parents try to help him in the best possible way and say that it would be a good idea if Andy got in touch with Rob's parents. Andy doesn't think this is a good idea at first, but ends up writing a letter showing the good times that he and Rob lived. Rob's parents receive the letter and are very moved.
Create a summary for the book “the giver” for chapters 7-15 PLEASE HURRY THE END OF THE TRIMESTER IS TMR!!
Answer:chapter
15 summary: The next day The Giver is in terrible pain, and he asks Jonas to take the memory he is having. He gives Jonas a memory of a war, a battlefield and men injured and dying. In the memory, Jonas is a young man who gives another badly injured solider water and then stays with the other soldier as he dies. Jonas is himself injured, and the pain he feels is horrifying. Afterward, The Giver is repentant and asks Jonas to forgive him, although they both know that The Giver didn't have the strength to carry the memory himself any longer.
chapter 6 summary: On the first day of the two-day December ceremony, Assignments for Ones through Eights are given out. Jonas learns that because his father pleaded Gabriel's case to the Committee, Gabriel is allowed one extra year of nurturing to gain weight. He will remain at home with Jonas's family, although the family is required to sign a pledge saying they won't get attached to the newchild.
Jonas's father's plea for Gabriel shows he is more prone to bending rules than other members of society are—a trait that Jonas may have inherited. The pledge the family signs foreshadow the opposite of its intended effect: Jonas will become attached to the baby, despite the rules.
Explanation:
Answer:
chapter 6: On the first day of the two-day December ceremony, Assignments for Ones through Eights are given out. Jonas learns that because his father pleaded Gabriel's case to the Committee, Gabriel is allowed one extra year of nurturing to gain weight. He will remain at home with Jonas's family, although the family is required to sign a pledge saying they won't get attached to the newchild.
Jonas's father's plea for Gabriel shows he is more prone to bending rules than other members of society are—a trait that Jonas may have inherited. The pledge the family signs foreshadow the opposite of its intended effect: Jonas will become attached to the baby, despite the rules.
Explanation:
What is the effect of the shift in narration from speaking to the reader to speaking directly to Fujio in Paragraph 15?
Answer: It emphasizes that the narrator understands something the boy does not yet understand
Explanation:
part A: which statement best summarizes the text?
A) learning is personal and focuses on improving weaknesses and enhancing strengths
B) All knowledge should be pursued and used with equal enthusiasm
C) It is the duty of those who study to make knowledge accessible for those who don't
D) Regardless of natural ability, knowledge should be pursued relentlessly.
Answer:
You might wanna send the passage
"A Story is like a person lifetime
Answer:
yes
Explanation:
fill in the blanks ( MODALS )
Answer:
I can not see your hand writing clearly. But here is the hint for MODAL verb
can: ability
should: advice
may: request for or permission
might: possibility
will, shall: certainly
must: to show the need, necessity
Explanation:
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I will mark you brainliest for the correct answer.
I chose one by accident
Please!! help
Answer:
He is a very experienced hunter
Explanation:
Rainsfords character was able to tell that the animal was big, but that the gun used to shoot it was a smaller one. he was also able to tell that the hunter who shot the animal was not able to kill it at first.
Answer:
The second answer choice
Explanation:
look at the paragraph that begin on page 1 and end at the top of page 3.
Explanation:Where is the pic?
Answer:
Explanation:
Don’t know
a. promise of escape
Explain:
b. horror of war
Explain:
c.
Importance of history
Explain:
d. Inaccuracy of memory
what’s a word for lying to go out?
Answer:
misleading
Explanation:
Answer:
u could also say untruthful.
Explanation:
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My teacher assigned a short assignment on Wednesday and made it due Thursday, I had to finish my missing chemistry assignments and I thought this assignment wouldn't matter much so I skipped it and focused on chemistry, she ended up splitting this assignment into 3 different grades and it brought down my grade 30 points, I have it completed now but she already graded it as a 0 on Thursday so I'd have to email her letting her know, what do I say?
Eassy about: Society is constantly developing and changing, and people disagree about the progress of this development. Do you believe that the world has changed for the better, or for the worse?
Need to be a five-paragraph compare and contrast eassy.
Answer:
I belive that some thing have changed for the better and somethings have changed for the worst but if I have to pick one i would say for the worst. we ad human should respect and care for our plant and we dont.
How are Juliet's motivations conflicted in Act III, scene ii
Answer:
Juliet feels conflicted because her love for Romeo clashes with her love and sense of duty to Tybalt, her cousin. Juliet expresses her conflicting emotions for Romeo using oxymoronic language: "Beautiful tyrant, fiend angelical."