ANYONE HAVE THE TIME TO READ THIS AND TELL ME WHAT TO DO TO IMPROVE? PLEASE IT WOULD MAKE MY DAY!!!!!!!
*Snow Day*

*Bill 12 years old

*Joe Bills friend 11 years old

*SCENE 1

*TIME, PLACE, BASIC SETTING, ETC.*

*Narrator,It was a cold winter morning in the middle of January our Characters Bill and Joe(they are BFs)are having fun during a snow day when they hear a loud noise.

*Bill*What was that Noise?

*Joe* I have no idea lets go find out.

*Bill*Yeah it sounded like it came form the forest over there. Lets go!.

*Narrator* The to children wonder into the woods in search of the noise they have heard.

“BANG!!!”

.*Bill* WHOA!!!!!!

Joe* (Whispers) Be quite theres something up there.

Bill* (Says in a low voice)Its an alien spaceship!

*SCENE ENDS*

Scene 2

Bill* Lets hide behind this bush.

*Joe.*Wow thats so weird are you sure?

*Bill.*Im sure. (Whispers)Uh-oh I think the Alien heard us!

Joe* What makes you think that?

Bill* Look!

Narrator* Joe looks over Bill to see the alien fitted in what looks like armor wobbles over to where they are hiding.

Joe* We got to get out of here!!

They Jump out of the bush and the alien looks frightened. It turns around and begins to run wabble away.

Joe*Wait we didn't mean to scare you!!

Bill* I think hes more afraid of us then we are of him.

Joe* Yeah, but we’ve got to help him hes not from here.

Bill* I agree and maybe we will be able to make this Duo a Trio.

Joe*Agreed Lets go!

Narrator* The Duo try to find clues on where the alien has went.

Bill* Joe, its getting late and we can’t find him.

Joe*Here!! A footprint!

Bill* Nice it looks like he went into the cave…

Joe*There he is! In the cave.

Narrator* The boys Cautiously enters the cave where they hear a slight rumbling and a CRASH.

Bill*(Coughs)Joe are you ok?

Joe*(Wheezes) Yeah but I think the cave fell in.

Bill* Yeah.

Joe* Wheres the Alien?

Bill* I think that he is on the other side of the wall.

Joe*We have to save him!

Bill* I know but its pitch black we are going to need to get supplies.

Narrator* The boys return to Joes house where they go into Joes Bedroom Where they got 2 Flashlight Glowsticks and Walkie Talkies.

Joe* I think that we are ready to save a alien!

END OF ACT 2

Scene 3

Narrator*The Boys return to the cave to help the alien. While Joe goes on top of the hill where the entrance to the cave is located while Bill goes in the cave to try find an opening.

Bill* I think that I may have found a small hole but I cant seem to slip through it.

Joe* Ok Ill keep looking up here if I find any holes ill let you know.

Bill* Ok, AHHHHHHH!!!!!!

Joe* Bill? Bill! Are you ok!?!

Bill* Yeah Yeah Im fine but there a bigger problem now.

Joe*Whats That?

Bill* The Aliens stuck under a rock!!

(The alien squirms and wiggles but cant get free.)

Joe*Hold on Im on my way!

Narrator*Bill looks down at the alien and sees he wont survive much longer so Bill takes matters into his own hands.

Bill* I have to save this alien!

(Bill Puts his hand on each side of the rock and begins to pull as hard as he cans)

Bill*(Grunts) Come On!!

Narrator* The rock begins to rise slowly but Bills strength is fading.

Bill*(Whimpers) I cant hold it much longer……

Joe* Hang in there Im on my way!

(The alien sees the effort and determination in Bills face and begins to help in the lifting of the rock)

Bill* All..most..there..

Narrator*As Bill and the alien strain to lift the Huge rock Joe runs as fast as he could to get back to where the where and just as the had used the last amount of there strength trying to lift the rock….Joe leaps into action and with there combined strength the alien shimmies out of underneath the rock. And with a loud thud the rock falls. But everything beings to shake… For The cave is CAVING IN!!

Bill* (Yells) WE’VE GOT TO GET OUT OF HERE!!

Joe*WE WILL NEVER MAKE IT!

(The alien grabs the two boys and takes off running bolt at top speed out of the cave just as the roof falls in. The alien sets them down and bows as if it was saying thank you.)

Bill*(Pants)Whoa what just happened?

Joe*(Mumbles) I have no idea.

(The alien looks at the two boys and pats them gently and there heads. As if he was saying Good Bye. The alien bolts out of sight and soon they see the alien ship fly over there heads out into the unknown universe.)

Bill* The alien saved our lives.

Joe* Yeah.

(As they talk about what has just happened something falls from the sky)

(Clash!)

Bill* What is it?

Joe*Its a figurine...an alien figurine. But what does it mean?

Bill*I think it means never to forget…

Joe* Yeah, Ill never forget today.

Narrator* They boys pretured from the forest and walk toward the sunset arms hung over one another toward the place they call home.

Bill*Yeah, me neither. But we can both agree… it was a great snow day.

*MOVIE/PLAY ENDS*

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Answer 1

Answer:

thats really good the only this is when someone is speaking use : ok but other than that its really great I love the story line

Explanation:

Answer 2
U did awesome!! Is this your first time?

Related Questions

What freedom were they fighting for in the Drummer boy of Shiloh?

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Answer:

Joby, the drummer boy, has a internal conflict with himself by being scared to die. In the second part of the story the reader starts to feel happy for Joby because the General comforts joby and asks him to lead the army through the war.

Explanation:

In The Secret Garden, how does Dickon respond when he first meets Mary?

He feels sorry about her ignorance about the countryside.

He is happy to teach her about plants and animals.

He tries to find out about the secret garden.

He views her as someone above him in society.
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Answer:

He is happy to teach her about plants and animals.

Explanation:

I read the book like 1 million times lol.

Answer:  The answer is B he is happy to teach her aboug plants and animals

Explanation: took test made 100


Every sentence has at least one _____.

adjective
independent clause
quotation mark
adverb

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Answer:

Independent clause!!!

Explanation:

Be sure that each sentence includes only one independent clause and the rest dependent clauses. A dependent clause cannot stand alone as a sentence. Like an independent clause, it has a subject and a verb.

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Continue the story "it was
Sunday afternoon
washing my cloths near wang chhu, when suddenly.. ​

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Answer:

 Writing a story can be frustrating if you don't have the imagination to do it at the moment. Here are some tips for writing a story.

1. Focus on the action

2. Don't want to cover it all

3. Find an idea and simplify it

4. Don't tell it, show it

5. Maintain structure

6. Don't give all the information, suggest it

7. Keep the suspense

8. Environment with little

Explanation:

"It was  Sunday afternoon . I was washing my cloths near wang chhu, when suddenly I dropped my favorite shirt into the river.

 I had that shirt for a long time and it meant a lot to me, so I had to get it back.

I couldn't get into the river because I can't swim, so I had to think about doing something quick before losing it.

Suddenly I saw a long branch that I could use, I approached the bank of the river and stretched as much as I could until I could finally reach my shirt.

From that moment I was always very careful when washing clothes in the river."

“The man in the well”

Wendy makes the mistake of...

A.) tell the man they lied about getting help.
B.) leaning too close and letting the man see her face.
C.) revealing one of their names to the man.
D.)revealing that Aaron's dad is a police officer.

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Answer:

revealing one of their names to the man

Explanation:

This might be hard to figure out but any examples/ ideas for a title of a short narrative suspenseful story? It’s a monster-based story and I don’t know what I should title it :( sorry if it’s a bit confusing but help me if you can!

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Hi! I have a few, not sure which one you’d like.

1. 2246: Plague
2. Holocaust Abyss
3. Exile

Read the following claim and then answer the question that follows:
Public school students should wear uniforms.

Which statement best describes the claim? (5 points)
a
The claim is effective.
b
The claim is ineffective because it does not state a clear position.
c
The claim is ineffective because it expresses a first person preference.
d
The claim is ineffective because it suggests the essay will inform rather than argue.

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The answer would be d.

We can deduce that it would not be a, as it is no effective.

B is not the right answer, as it does state a clear position.

C is not right, either, as it is not expressing a first-person preference.

1. The wolves that followed Shere Khan ate
2. Bagheera explains that he offered an item in exchange for Mowgli. The item he exchanged for
Mowgli was a
3. When the characters in the text speak about the red flower, they are not speaking about a real
flower. They are actually speaking about
4. At one point in the text, Bagheera tells Mowgli that he now knows Mowgli is a man. Bagheera
knows Mowgli is a man because he sees
5. Before leaving the jungle, Mowgli tells Bagheera that he needs to say goodbye to someone. The
character he wants to tell goodbye is

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Answer:

3) A bull.

5) The wolves.

Answer:

a

Explanation:

please help.

The primary goal of a biographer is to
O give the reader an understanding of the personality of his subject
O give historical facts about a particular period and person
O present his subject as positively as possible

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Answer:

the 2nd answer.

Explanation:

Main goal iof a biographer s to describe (objetively) a life of a specific person, so the right answer is the second one.

Which sentence from the article would be MOST
important to include in a summary of the article?
A
As far as home planets go, Earth meets the
criteria.
B
Now, the billionaire businessman has provided
more details of his vision to make humans a
multi-planetary species.
C
The paper strikes a cheerful, even humorous
tone and doen't get excessively bogged down
in technical detail.
D
The moon is dismissed for being too small.

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You need to have more information so that it can be answered

Change the voice of the following.
The thief was arrested
b. She was helped by Ram
ciwas giving warm clothes to the poor
She made the kite
e. He has bought a new mobile phone​

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

it's makes sense just needs to be spelled correctly

Which of these is the best example of a situation that would lead to disillusionment?

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Answer:

A. You apply for several jobs you expect to be offered but don't get called back for any.

Answer:

A. you apply for several jobs you expect to be offered but dont get called back for any

get Explanation:

I got it right on my test

Writing this because I need help tonight, 75 points!

My Lit II teacher assigned a five-paragraph paper, and I don't understand the prompt; I don't understand what she wants me to write about. Can someone just explain this prompt?

Prompt: In each story, landscape plays a large part of thematic concerns and outcomes. Synonyms for landscape are listed below. Using at least three stories, discuss how “landscape” as one of the synonyms (instead of the usual “countryside”) contributes to the authors’ concerns and message.

Landscape NOUN
1. all the visible features of an area of countryside or land, often considered in terms of their aesthetic appeal:
synonyms: scenery · countryside · topography · country · terrain · outlook · view · vista · prospect · aspect · panorama · perspective · sweep

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man im sorry i wish i could but gptta go to sleep

What role do race and class play in gentrification?

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Answer:

residents and anti- gentrification activists tend to fear gentrification will lead to displacement by white residents while some experts believe its an optimistic sign of an economic boom that would enable people to rise up economically.

when white neighborhoods experience socioeconomic ascent, they retain whites. and when minority neighborhood experience it, they more become white.

Explanation:

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Which question will best help a student describe a story's resolution?
How is the character's problem solved?
Where does this story take place?
Who assists the main character most?
Does the ending leave questions unanswered?

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Answer:

A) How is the character's problem solved?

Explanation:

Could possibly be D but A fits better. The resolution is the ending, so to describe it you would want to explain how the conflict ended.

Who assists the main character most ?

In "Those Winter Sundays," the family thanks the father profusely for all his labors.

Question 4 options:
A) True
B) False

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Answer:

False

Explanation:

Excerpt from Those Winter Days

"1Sundays too my father got up early

2and put his clothes on in the blueblack cold,  

3then with cracked hands that ached  

4from labor in the weekday weather made  

5banked fires blaze. No one ever thanked him. "

Which sentence describes a poems meter

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i can’t see the sentences

Write the correct form of the verb in parentheses
The man(flush) the toilet

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Answer:

Flushed.

Explanation:

A verb is one of the parts of speech in English language. Verbs can be defined as any word that describes an action, occurrence, or state of existence. Some examples of verb are dance, sing, walk, play, run, sit, etc.

Hence, the correct statement would be "The man flushed the toilet" in past tense.

Steven needs to add an in-text citation to the following sentence. The information is from the book Alice's Adventures in Wonderland by Lewis Carroll. The information was found on page 33. In Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, we know the Rabbit fears the Queen of Hearts because he speaks in a "low, hurried tone" and looks "anxiously over his shoulder." Which sentence uses a correct in-text citation? A. In Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, we know the Rabbit fears the Queen of Hearts because he speaks in a "low, hurried tone" and looks "anxiously over his shoulder" (33). B. In Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, we know the Rabbit fears the Queen of Hearts because he speaks in a "low, hurried tone" and looks "anxiously over his shoulder" (Carroll). C. In Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, we know the Rabbit fears the Queen of Hearts because he speaks in a "low, hurried tone" and looks "anxiously over his shoulder" (Alice in Wonderland). D. In Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, we know the Rabbit fears the Queen of Hearts because he speaks in a "low, hurried tone" and looks "anxiously over his shoulder" (Carroll, Alice in Wonderland, 33).

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

Answer:

C

Explanation:

How did their father's death affect the Grimm family?

1. The brothers became interested in fairy tales.

2. The family was reduced to near poverty.

3. O The brothers decided to become lawyers.

4. Jakob never married.

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Answer: The correct answer is 2  The family was reduced to near poverty.

Explanation:

The brothers decided to become lawyers

Some people have brought up cooking. Food preparation is a skill that
students will use throughout their lives. For example, Youth Focus
magazine reports that early culinary education is likely to help young
adults live independently, reduce expenses, and even offer meals to
friends and family. But the benefits of cooking classes go beyond
learning to chop, mix, and sauté. In addition to building these skills,
cooking lessons offer hands-on experiences that can help students
understand other subjects such as nutrition, chemistry, and even math.
Furthermore, classes can help break down boundaries by introducing
students to foods from other cultures. Perhaps most importantly,
though, cooking classes bring students together because they are fun
- and, of course, the results are delicious.
How could this essay draft best be revised to clarify meaning and enhance
style?
O A. Use transitions to clarify the flow of ideas.
O B. Maintain a formal style.
O C. Clarify the topic and purpose in the topic sentence,
OD. Use evidence that supports the topic sentence more clearly.

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Answer:

Its C

Explanation:

The essay can be revised to clarify meaning and enhance style by C. Clarify the topic and purpose in the topic sentence.

It should be noted that when writing an essay, it's important for the individual to convey the message clearly in order for the readers to understand.

Therefore, since the essay is vague and ambiguous, it can be revised to clarify meaning and enhance style by clarifying the topic and purpose in the topic sentence.

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Is it right or I have mistakes?.

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Answer:

its correct

Explanation:

Which sentence from "Getting Fit with Technology" provides
support for the author's claim in "Step Away from the
Smartphone"?
O A. After a long workday, it is tempting to collapse on the
sofa and catch up on social media or zone out with
television. (Paragraph 1)
O
B. Many such devices are strapped on like watches, so
users can wear them all day to track activity, eating,
and even sleep habits. (Paragraph 2)
O C. At the session's end, the virtual coach will offer praise
for a job well done.(Paragraph 3)
O D. According to a recent study, 73 percent of users think
that they are healthier as a result of using fitness
technology. (Paragraph 5)

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Answer: the answer is A

Explanation:

The author in “getting fit with technology” is arguing that technology aka social media/ television is is being overused and is the main contributor to decline in fitness and health.

Who does Dr. Livesey claim are the only two honest men on the ship in chapters 7-9 of Treasure Island?

A. Himself and Mr. Trelawney
B. Himself and Jim
C. Captain Smollett and John Silver
D. Captain Smollett and Mr. Arrow

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The answer to this should be c

Please help me. I'm so brain dead right now.

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Answer:

The first one I think

Explanation:

The best way to solve this type of problem is to look up the definition of each word. If you don't have a dictionary you can break down each word and use words you already know to find the meaning of the word.

In the table below, explain the irony of the narrator’s words in lines 82–91.

"Quickly, the dragon came at him, encouraged
As Beowulf fell back; its breath flared,
And he suffered, wrapped around in swirling
85 Flames—a king, before, but now
A beaten warrior. None of his comrades
Came to him, helped him, his brave and noble
Followers; they ran for their lives, fled
Deep in a wood. And only one of them
90 Remained, stood there, miserable, remembering,
As a good man must, what kinship should mean."

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Unclear question. However,  I inferred you want to know where the statement is gotten from.

Answer:

A statement made by author  Burton Raffel.

Explanation:

Beowulf is an epic poem whose main character is named Beowulf. This young warrior travels to Denmark with the aim of defeating his enemy named Grendel, in which he was successful.

After defeating several enemies during his lifetime, now old Beowulf decides to fight a dragon that was causing trouble for his people. Sadly, even though he killed the dragon, Beowulf died  shortly after the encounter because he was bitten by the dragon  in the neck. It is at this point the statement made at the outset becomes clear, "a king, before, but now A beaten warrior. None of his comrades Came to him, helped him, his brave and noble Followers; they ran for their lives, fled Deep in a wood...

The irony in the passage was the several enemies during the lifetime of Beowulf and Grendel. “The line of the irony a king, before, but now A beaten warrior. None of his comrades Came to him, helped him, his brave and noble.”

What is irony?

The term “Irony” the use of words to express something other than and especially the opposite of the literal meaning. Irony is the use of language to convey meaning other than or even the complete opposite of that which it originally intended.

The irony in the text was that Beowulf is an epic poem with the same name as its main character. This youthful warrior journeys to Denmark in order to defeat his adversary, Grendel. Beowulf decided to face a dragon that was causing difficulties for his people after overcoming many foes during his career.

As a result, the irony in the line are the many enemies during the war.

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what is the reason the school provides for miles expolsion

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Answer:

The governess interviews Miles carefully, trying to coax out of him the reason for his expulsion from school. She is unsuccessful. Miles maintains that he wants to go back to school to be around his “own sort,” to which the governess laughs and refers to Flora as the only example of his “sort” she knows.

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what is a independent clause
what is an independent clause ​

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A independent clause has a verb and a subject.It can stand alone.

Example:
I enjoy sitting by the fireplace and reading.
Waiting to have my car's oil changed is boring.
She wants to travel the world and see wonderful sights.

1. To make my bones strong,
(Reality)
A. I will drink milk once a year
B. I will drink milk everyday
C. I will drink milk every minute, every day
2. To get a perfect score in the test,
(Fantasy).
A. I will use my super powers to read my teacher's mind
B. I will study overnight
C. I will sleep early
3. To buy my dream bicycle,
(Fantasy).
A. I will save money in my piggy bank
B. I will ask Santa Claus to give it as a Christmas present
C. I will get along with my mom and dad
4. To go to Hongkong Disneyland,
(Reality).
A. I will ride in an airplane
B. I will ride on a magic carpet
C. I will soar like an eagle on air
5. In order to grow more plants in my garden,
(Reality)
A. I will talk, kiss and hug them everyday
B. I will look after and water them everyday
C. I will let the animals play in the garden​

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Answer:

1.B 2.B 3.A 4.A 5.B.,.........

Why do u want to be a surgeon

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Your journey to become a surgeon will be long, testing, but ultimately one of the most rewarding things you'll ever do. You'll use all of your hard-earned expertise to help people lead better and fuller lives, as well as improving the surgical profession for generations of patients to come

Answer:

I don't? But... if I did it's because the pay is good and you can save a lot of people

Explanation:

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