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Read the passage from an argumentative essay.

"The Columbian Exchange was bad. It had many effects on native peoples. One of these effects was disease. Disease harmed people. It led to death. Some say up to 90 percent of native peoples died.”

How should the passage be revised to create a more formal tone?

Slang terms should be removed.
First-person pronouns should be added.
Simple sentences should be balanced with more complex ones.
Long and complex sentences should be split apart and made shorter.

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Answer 1

Answer: ok here is the awnser.

Explanation:

- use more of a deeper vocabulary rather than words like "bad"

"The Columbian Exchange was terrible. It had many effects on native peoples. One of these effects was the spread of diseases. Disease affected people which contributed to the deaths of many people . Some suggest up to 90 percent of native peoples died.”

Answer 2

Answer:

The answer is C.

Explanation:

It is C because when I wrote in my notes I put " balance simple sentences with complex ones". please mark brainliest


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Do you attend Hagwon?
Does Hagwon help in improving your grades?

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No I don’t attend it but after some research, the school seems pretty bad.
I mean, why beat the students if they don’t have perfect grades? Why not talk it outء?
But that’s just from what I’ve read.

But this is what I got for your answer.
The best resources you will have for finding a great hagwon are the teachers who are currently working there. Be sure to ask for a contact at the school so you can speak directly with someone who has been there.

If you really wanna attend there, gl. Tell me how it goes

No I don't attend it..

They don't really help much in improving grades in my opinion..

here is something which may help you:

WHAT IS HAGWON?

Hagwon is the Korean-language word for a for-profit private institute, academy, or cram school prevalent in South Korea. Although most widely known for their role as "cram schools", where children can study to improve test scores, hagwons actually perform several educational functions:

•supplementary education that many children need just to keep up with the regular school curriculum..

•remedial education for the children who fall behind in their work..

•training in areas not covered in schools..

•preparation for students striving to improve test scores and preparing for the high school and university entrance examinations (the university entrance exam is also called suneung (수능))..

Some information on Hagwon..

Hagwons normally operate from around 4-10pm on weekdays and all day on the weekends. Regular school starts around eight in the morning, which means some of these students are sitting in the classroom for as many as fourteen or fifteen hours a day. This is before they go home to complete their homework.

Not many children would be good at coping with this kind of stress. As a hagwon teacher, it is very important to understand the stress your student faces. If your students are messing around, having a hard time focusing or never seem to complete their homework, it’s probably not because they are bad or rebellious students; it’s often simply because they cannot keep up and they’ve focused for as long as they can for one day.

describe the symbolism in the tree of life​

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Answer:

The Tree of Life symbol represents our personal development, uniqueness and individual beauty. Just as the branches of a tree strengthen and grow upwards to the sky, we too grow stronger, striving for greater knowledge, wisdom and new experiences as we move through life.

Explanation:

Which option best completes the diagram?

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d

Explanation:

the fourteenth Amendment is repeales.

Answer:

C. Most protections in the Bill of Rights are incorporated on a case-by-case basis.

Explanation:

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Does anyone use the plato curriculum, 8th grade? We could help eachother through the course..

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Answer:

i dont lol

Explanation:

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Give two beliefs that Sunni muslims have about ashura

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Answer:

For Shi’a Muslims all over the world, this is a special but extremely sad day on which they focus solely on commemorating the death of Husayn in battle.

Explanation:

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According to the Declaration Of Independence, only the president can give the government the power to rule?

True or False ?

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The answer is false
False

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What is resilience explain in short terms​

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Answer:

Resilience is the ability to recover, or bounce back from  misfortune or change.Like the ability a soldier has to get wounded , recieve minimal treatment and then continue on with the fight.He's RESILIANT.

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PLZZZ help What was the outcome of the opium wars?
A) British missionaries were thrown of china
B) British merchants were forbidden to trade in china.
C) British opium addicts had to find new drug sources
D) British gunboats forced china to make majot concessions

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Answer:

british missionares were thrown out of china

Explanation:

Imagine you are filling a bucket with water but the bucket has a hole in it what will happen to the level of the water in the bucket

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It matters where the hole is, if the hole is in the bottom and there is a small amount of water being added, but if there is a lot of water being poured in constantly then it will slowly fill up.

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How did W.E.B. Du Bois contribute to the Harlem
Renaissance?
A
He composed music based on African American motifs
B
He led a movement to return to Africa
С.
He wrote plays about the African-American experience
He wrote about the struggle for African-American identity

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I think this answer is C

Which countries would you expect to have the strongest
economy?
A countries with high GDPs per capita
B) countries with low GDPs per capita
countries with average GDPs per capita

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The answer to this Is A

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Fill in the table by explaining the given events, civilizations, people, or places from the early medieval period. Your responses should briefly define or explain each term in your own words.

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I can’t see the words. Give me the words in text form so I can better help you.

Answer:

Western Roman Empire The westernmost of the two empires created by the division of the later Roman Empire, esp after its final severance from the Eastern Roman Empire (395 ad)

Mecca A city in western Saudi Arabia, an oasis town in the Red Sea region of Hejaz, east of Jiddah.

Crusades The Crusades were a series of religious wars initiated, supported, and sometimes directed by the Latin Church in the medieval period.

Muhammad The founder of Islam and the proclaimer of the Qurʾān. Muhammad is traditionally said to have been born in 570 in Mecca and to have died in 632 in Medina, where he had been forced to emigrate to with his adherents in 622.

Feudal Japan Feudal Japan abbreviated as FJ is the Japanese era during the Middle Ages. This era successfully demonstrates the spirit of real Japan during the medieval period. This was the time when Japan was ruled over by shoguns, warlords and their associates

Jerusalem Jerusalem was important to Christians, because it was where Jesus was crucified and where he rose again, those are the most important events in history according to medieval Christians.

Thomas Aquinas Theology and Philosophy. After completing his education, Saint Thomas Aquinas devoted himself to a life of traveling, writing, teaching, public speaking and preaching.

Constantinople The city of Constantinople was the largest and richest city of the Byzantine Empire during the Middle Ages.

Saxons The Saxons were a people from north Germany who migrated to the island of Britain around the 5th century.

Constantine The age of Constantine marked a distinct epoch in the history of the Roman Empire, both for founding Byzantium in the east, as well as his adoption of Christianity as a state religion.

Empress Wu Zetian During her reign, Empress Wu expanded the borders of China by conquering new lands in Korea and Central Asia

Visigoths The Visigoths were an early Germanic people who, along with the Ostrogoths , constituted the two major political entities of the Goths within the Roman Empire in Late Antiquity, or what is known as the Migration Period.

The Magna Carta, in establishing certain rights and protections of medieval barons against arbitrary rule by the English King, was a document important for establishing the doctrine of which of the following?
Select one:
A. free trade
B. divine right of kings
C. limited government
D. universal suffrage

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Answer:

A or D

Explanation:

Women did not have the right to vote, and people were dying and starving, one of the main reasons were to limit the kings power, not the government.

I'm sorry I don't have an answer but I limited your opinions.

What does it mean to say the meaning of a creative work is subjective?

A. That people react exactly the same to it.
B. The people have different ideas about it.
C. That it’s message is ignored by people.
D. That the work is not well liked by people.

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Answer:

Should be b

Explanation:

Saying that meaning of a creative work is subjective means that people are experiencing that work as a person's inner creativity not as a creativity of external environment

Answer:

B

Explanation:

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In what areas of the country should this material be marketed?

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Answer:

It depends on the what is being marketed.

Explanation:

If it's a place where people live, then it would make sense to market a store or a restaurant.

Which of the is NOT a responsibility of the House of Representatives.
a. Initiate spending bills
b. Recommend tax bills
c. Recommend a government official
d. Buy better food for the MLK High School

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Answer: D is the answer

Explanation:

But better food for the MLK high school pretty sure the executive can only do that

1. These are organisms that can be seen only with the aid of a microscope.
a. Fertilization
b. Budding
c. Reproducting
d. Microorganism
e. Asexual reproduction
f. Fragmentation
g. Spore fromation
h. Sexual reproduction
i. Vegetative propagation
j. Binary fission

2. The process of producting new individual or offspring.
a. Fertilization
b. Budding
c. Reproduction
d. Microorganism
e. Asexual reproduction
f. Fragmentation
g. Spore formation
h. Sexual reproduction
i. Vegetative propagation
j. Binary fission

3. It involves two parents and the offspring are genetically different.
a. Fertilization
b. Budding
c. Reproducting
d. Microorganism
e. Asexual reproduction
f. Fragmentation
g. Spore formation
h. Sexual reproduction
i. Vegetative propagation
j. Binary fission

4. This only involves one parent and there are no sex cells involved.
a. Fertilization
b. Budding
c. Reproducting
d. Microorganism
e. Asexual reproduction
f. Fragmentation
g. Spore formation
h. Sexual reproduction
i. Vegetative propagation
j. Binary fission

5. An asexual reproduction where a single parent divide into two.
a. Fertilization
b. Budding
c. Reproducting
d. Microorganism
e. Asexual reproduction
f. Fragmentation
g. Spore formation
h. Sexual reproduction
i. Vegetative propagation
j. Binary fission

6. A new organism is formed from a bud which is an outgrowth from the parent.
a. Fertilization
b. Budding
c. Reproducting
d. Microorganism
e. Asexual reproduction
f. Fragmentation
g. Spore formation
h. Sexual reproduction
i. Vegetative propagation
j. Binary fission

7. Worms, sponges, and starfish reproduce in this kind of process.
a. Fertilization
b. Budding
c. Reproducting
d. Microorganism
e. Asexual reproduction
f. Fragmentation
g. Spore formation
h. Sexual reproduction
i. Vegetative propagation
j. Binary fission

8. A type of asexual reproduction where organisms reproduce by forming spores.
a. Fertilization
b. Budding
c. Reproducting
d. Microorganism
e. Asexual reproduction
f. Fragmentation
g. Spore formation
h. Sexual reproduction
i. Vegetative propagation
j. Binary fission

9. It reproduces offspring from it vegetative organs such as stem, roots and leave.
a. Fertilization
b. Budding
c. Reproducting
d. Microorganism
e. Asexual reproduction
f. Fragmentation
g. Spore formation
h. Sexual reproduction
i. Vegetative propagation
j. Binary fission

10. The union of egg cell and sperm cell to form zygote is called.
a. Fertilization
b. Budding
c. Reproductinig
d. Microorganism
e. Asexual reproduction
f. Fragmentation
g. Spore formation
h. Sexual reproduction
i. Vegetative propagation
j. Binary fission


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1) d: microorganism
2) c: reproduction
3) h: sexual reproduction
4) e: asexual reproduction
5) f: fragmentation
6) b: budding
7) j: binary fission
8) g: spore formation
9) i: vegetative propagation
10) a: fertilization


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As Huong learns to talk, her brain is also developing the
ability to hear sounds and to make fine mouth
movements, both of which are needed to understand
and make speech. This is an example of how different
dimensions of development:
A. are distinct.
B. are the same.
C. overlap. (correct answer)
D. cancel each other out.

THE ANSWER IS OVERLAP

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Answer:

From my understanding of the question I would conclude the answer is C. Overlap

Explanation:

(I see that you have also concluded the same thing, I hope you know that answer is correct)

"No one's like me, I'm Harley frickin' Quinn"!

-Harley Quinn (Birds of Prey)

This is an example of how different dimensions of development overlap each other. Thus the correct answer is C.

What is the overlap?

Overlap refers to situation when two things interact or getting in touch to share some responsibility. This shows that some of the characteristics of one thing are included or affect another thing.

Here the development of Huong is interrelated as she develops her talking ability her brain is also developing the ability to hear sounds in response to that. This shows the characteristics of overlapping.

The actions of talk are responding brain to develop more changes for hearing and speech movements. Therefore, option C overlap is the appropriate answer.

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any five differences between mountain region and hilly region of Nepal?​

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mountain region.

climate is extremely cold.apple and other different fruits are grown.mostly bhote,magar and sherpa live here.many mountains are found which help to attract tourist.Yak, Sheep etc animals are found here.

hilly region.

climate is moderate.the land is fertile .mostly newar, Gurung and Chhetri live here.many natural resources are found.elephant , doges etc animals are found here

3. How did the Spanish feel about Indians?

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The Spanish attitude toward the Indians was that they saw themselves as guardians of the Indians basic rights.

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is an authoritarian form of government, characterized by a single leader.

a. Theocracy
b. Monarchy
c. Oligarchy
d. Democracy

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Monarchy - it’s usually a queen/king rulimg

Answer:

B. Monarchy

Explanation:

A monarchy is a type of government as a dictatorship or like when there were kings and queens.

Do you think the treaty of versailles was fair or why not or why

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Answer:

The Treaty was fair in the sense that it could be justified by the Allied powers. It was not wise in that the harsh conditions of the treaty set the stage for world war II. Germany had declared war on France Russia and England after Russia declared war on the Austrian Hungarian Empire.

What is the difference between the natural resources on the continental islands and the Pacific islands?

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Answer:

An island is a body of land surrounded by water.Continents are also surrounded by water, but because they are so big, they are not consideredislands. ... Other islands are huge. Greenland, for example, covers an area of about 2,166,000 square kilometers (836,000 square miles).

What percentage of upstate New Yorkers today live
within 25 miles of the Erie Canal?

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Answer:

80%

Nearly 80% of upstate New York's population lives within 25 miles of the Erie Canal. The Erie Canal's success was part of a Canal-building boom in New York in the 1820s

Why was the Albany movement unable to fully achieve its desegregation goals?

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Answer: The support among Middle class African Americans was lacking.

Explanation: They had a weak support system, and therefore they were unable to get far with there goals.

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How did the Athenians differ from the Spartans?

The Athenians allowed girls to become educated, while the Spartans did not.

Athenian women had more rights than the women of Sparta.

Athenians stressed the importance of education, while Spartans stressed military strength.

Spartan life was much easier than Athenian life.

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Answer:

Women in Sparta had more rights than women in Athens as well. Spartan women could inherit property while Athenian women had no such rights.

Explanation:

Sparta was ruled by two kings, who ruled until they died or were forced out of office. Athens was ruled by archons, who were elected annually. Thus, because both parts of Athens' government had leaders who were elected, Athens is said to have been the birthplace of democracy. Spartan life was simple.

Answer:

The athenians sare diffrent cause they wanted peace they were a farming and welcoming society.

And the spartans are a war based society and they would train from the age of 8 to be ready for war.

Explanation:

How do white people view or understand colorism?

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Answer:

Explanation:

Colorism is the practice of favoring lighter skin over darker skin. The preference for lighter skin can be seen within any racial or ethnic background.

How has colonialism shaped the cultures of Central America and the Caribbean? Be able to give specific examples for their religion, language, music/dance, and ethnicity.

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Answer:

Colonialism has been regarded as a significant and common experience that has been reflected on Caribbean people of today’s culture and values, based on the events and circumstances that occurred during the 16th ,17th and 18th century .

Explanation:

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Answer:

A.

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Which historical event inspired The Killer Angels by Michael Shaara?

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Answer:

The Battle of Gettysburg

The Battle of Gettysburg, the bloodiest battle of the American Civil war, is the historical event that inspired The Killer Angels by Michael Shaara.

Answer:

The battle of Gettysburg

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