Is this a good start to a story?
Please I need comments on my work!

Is This A Good Start To A Story?Please I Need Comments On My Work!

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Answer 1

Answer:

Yes, I love it

Explanation:

Answer 2

It seems good, I would totally read this! What I would change would be the repetition in the start of the sentence and the "OH YEAH" part to lowercase. If I was able to change this, I would need to copy and paste, but yeah. I'd say it's a good story starter!


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Give examples of fallacies in advertisements and their types.

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Answer:

Explanation:

Ad hominem (meaning "against the person")—attacks the person and not the issue

2. Appeal to emotions—manipulates people's emotions in order to get their attention away from an important issue

3. Bandwagon—creates the impression that everybody is doing it and so should you

write a letter to your father asking him 3 things needed in your University admission​

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Explanation:

100 plan st

north Carolina

Africa

Nigeria

jan 34 20019

dear dad,

I am writing u this letter in help of my university admission.

In order for me to get all the things I need for the university I also need my Id copy and ur Id copy and I don't have any money at all to do so can you plz send me some money alone with a copy of your id and also can u plz go to my former school and collect my exam results and mail all to me plz.

if I don't get these 3 things u wouldnt be able to complete my university admission.

your son

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can someone do a prank for me ?

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Answer:

well, whats the prank?

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Yes. if you make cereal for anyone, make it the night before and put it in the freezer afterwards. then make some jello in a cup for juice. take the frozen cereal out of the freezer approximately 10 mins before they get to eat it.

Explanation:

True or False: Reading arguments that oppose your own opinion can help you broaden your understanding of an is True O False​

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Answer:

True, I'm pretty sure

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We were cautioned by the 8th grade World History teacher Mrs. Petersen not to run in the halls.
where to put ellipsis in the sentence?​

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We were cautioned by the 8th grade World History teacher Mrs. Petersen not to run in the halls...

At the end :)

Read these lines from the Roosevelt excerpt:
That is no vision of a distant millennium. It is a definite basis for a kind of world attainable in our own time and generation. That kind
of world is the very antithesis of the so-called new order of tyranny which the dictators seek to create with the crash of a bomb.
The word "tyranny" refers to which other word in this excerpt from the speech?
a. Basis
b. Crash
c. Bomb
d. Dictators

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Answer:

I think it may be A. Basis

Explanation:

Because the passage states that the type of world "Attainable in out own time and generation" is "the very antithesis of the so-called new order of tyranny wich the dictators seek to create."

I might be wrong, I'm just guessing.

I hope this helps anyways :)

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how does Theseus's dicision develop the plot

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we do not know what you mean? can you explain more

Answer:

Builds suspense

Explanation:

A: Describes the conflict

B: Builds suspense

C: illustrates the theme

D: Resolves conflict

What factors are especially important to consider when you are analyzing world literature?
Select one:
a. history and culture of the author’s place of origin
b. only plot, characterization, and theme
c. only what the story has in common with other works
d. history and culture of the translator of the work

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Answer:

option a

Explanation:

when reading world literature, the author may be from a different place than you. This means they have different life experiences, a different day to day life, and different ways of thinking. You need to keep in mind where the author is from so you can better understand what they are writing about.  

Hope this helps :)

Answer:

a. history and culture of the author’s place of origin

Explanation:

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explain the paradox the child is father of the man​

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Answer:

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Explanation:

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word related with English​

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Based on the paragraph, why does it seem that Swift wanted to help the Irish?
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"Swift's Ireland was a country that had been effectively controlled by England for nearly 500 years. The Stuarts had established a Protestant governing aristocracy amidst the country's relatively poor Catholic population. Denied union with England in 1707 (when Scotland was granted it), Ireland continued to suffer under English trade restrictions and found the authority of its own Parliament in Dublin severely limited. Swift, though born a member of Ireland's colonial ruling class, came to be known as one of the greatest of Irish patriots. He, however, considered himself more English than Irish, and his loyalty to Ireland was often ambivalent in spite of his staunch support for certain Irish causes. The complicated nature of his own relationship with England may have left him particularly sympathetic to the injustices and exploitation Ireland suffered at the hands of its more powerful neighbor."

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Answer:

Because I belive Swift wanted Ireland to be a independent country out of the hands of England.

Hope this helped!

which of these is most needed at an intersection?
a) a traffic light
b) a shopping mall
c) a computer terminal
d) a billboard

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

Shopping malls, computer terminals, or billboards cannot prevent a car crash. Traffic lights can :)

Answer:
a) a traffic light

Read the following sentence from the passage. Audubon was a lovable, courteous man, never too poor to help others, very modest and gracious. The author makes the above claim at the end of the passage about John James Audubon. Does the author prove this statement in the article? Write a multi-paragraph argumentative essay in which you discuss whether or not the author’s claim is supported by sufficient evidence and reasons. Introduce your ideas, cite textual evidence to support your response, and provide a concluding statement at the end of the essay. Be sure to observe the conventions of standard English.

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Answer:

According to the author, Audubon is a kind, caring, and lovable man. The author proves this state in the article, ( you would put a QOUTE from the text where the author says Audubon is a lovable man) . That shows how the author portrays As a wonderful man.

In the passage from The Heart Is a Lonely Hunter, how do Mick's thoughts about
her father help to develop her character?
A. by showing that music has always had a powerful effect on her
B. by showing that her family has always supported her goals
C. by showing that she has always gotten what she wants
D. by showing that she has always been easily frustrated

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Answer:

b

Explanation:

Hathorne states, “At every execution I have seen naught but high satisfaction in the town."
What is your reaction to this statement?

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Answer:

WHAT THE ******************************************

Explanation:

What type of information should you leave out of a summary of an informational article?
Select one:
a. a statement of the main idea
b. details that support the main idea
c. secondary details
d. key points

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

Whatever they are, secondary details that don't support the main idea should be left out.

C is your best answer.

Answer:

c

Explanation:

C because you don't need to add extra details

What does it mean to be success??

Why should we be success ??

Does being Success make a difference in the world?

Please use your own words

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What does it mean to be successful?

Being successful is (the opposite of failure) and is the status of having achieved and accomplished an aim or objective. Being successful means the achievement of desired visions and planned goals. The dictionary describes success as the following: “attaining wealth, prosperity and/or fame”.

Why should we be successful?

Being successful is when you have achieved/accomplished something to be proud of in life which means people should try to be successful because you would have something to be proud of and something you achieved in life like your goal and because you would know that you can do anything if you put your mind to it since you accomplished a goal.

Does being Success make a difference in the world?

Success could make a difference in the world if you accomplish something nobody every has.

Which lines form the poem make up a stanza?

1. Lines 1-2
2. Lines 4-5
3. Lines 6-8
4. Lines 9-12

I need the answer less than 3 minutes please

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Answer: lines 6-8

Explanation:

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Answer:

3-4

Explanation:

3-4

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These are the pics for the question

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Answer:

1. the prince

Explanation:

the dwarf called out to him

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Answer: d and can i have a brainiest

Explanation:

Answer:

its  D

Explanation:

Which of these is a Pre-Writing Exercise?
O Editing
O Publishing
O Brainstorming
O Revising​

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brainstorming is a pre writing one.

Answer: Brainstorming

Reason: I just did Process of Elimination because Editing means to fix the mistakes in ones writing. Publishing means to send ones writing for the public or set audience to read it. And Revising is for someone to correct // read ones essay, and the last answer (Which is Correct) is Brainstorming which means to writes one ideas down and write a practice essay.

I hope this helps, and Happy Holidays! :)

If a golfer on Christmas Island does not hit a ball in a hole but the ball is “in,” it is most likely which month?
A.
June

B.
November

C.
December

D.
September

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Answer:

d

Explanation:

If a golfer on Christmas Island does not hit a ball in a hole but the ball is “in,” it is most likely in September month.

What do you mean by Golfer?

Someone who plays golf as a job or hobby is a golfer.

Christmas Island, or the Territory of Christmas Island, is a part of Australia that consists of the same-named island. It is situated in the Indian Ocean, roughly 1,550 km (840 nmi) northwest of the closest point on the Australian mainland, and about 350 km (190 nmi) south of Java and Sumatra. It is located 1,327 kilometres (717 nmi) south of Singapore and 2,600 km (1,400 nmi) northwest of Perth. It is 135 square kilometres in size (52 sq mi).

As of 2021, there were 1,692 people living on Christmas Island, the majority of whom were housed in communities on the island's northernmost tip. Flying Fish Cove is the principal settlement.

Therefore, Option (D) is correct.

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1. The dogs in my neighbour’s yard started barking.
2. The teacher asked the students in the back row of the classroom to please be quiet.

3. At the beginning of “A Christmas Carol," how did Ebenezer Scrooge treat others ?

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Answer:

He was very selfish and wanted everything for himself, especially money, so he despised those around him. He did not treat them kindly and pushed them away out of distrust and distaste for willing to give their money to others.

Answer:

He treated all of the people unfairly and with no respect. The way he treated people was understandable because he hated christmas but not necassary. Later in the movie though he did end to love Christmas and treated everyone with kindness and its really nice to see his behavior change.

Based on the context what meaning does this passage convey by using verbal irony?
Overall, the drummer's smashing, stomping, thrashing, and pounding made for an... interesting interpretation of soft jazz.
A. The author found the drummer's playing to be innovative
B. The author is secretly jealous of the drummer's skill
C. The author does not particularly like soft jazz
D. The author thinks the performance was unsuitable

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Answer:

D. The author thinks the performance was unsuitable

Explanation:

Shmashing, stomping, thrashing, and pounding are not soft.

Answer: D.

Explanation: The author thinks the performance was unsuitable

based on the passage, what is the most important cause that led George and his friends to become doctors? Explain your answer in one to two sentences.

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Answer:

According to George ,choosing to attend the presentation was the most important cause that led to him and his friends becoming doctors .

Answer: Attending the presentation was the most important cause.

Explanation:

Imagine how the great writers must feel it knowing they have That Power convert this memoir into profile

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This question is incomplete. Here's the complete question.

Excerpt from Moonwalk , By Michael Jackson

I have always wanted to be able to tell stories, you know, stories that came from my soul. I’d like to sit by a fire and tell people stories – make them see pictures, make them cry and laugh, take them anywhere emotionally with something as deceptively simple as words. I’d like to tell tales to move their souls and transform them. I have always wanted to be able to do that. Imagine how the great writers must feel, knowing they have that power. I sometimes feel I could do it. It’s something I’d like to develop. In a way, songwriting uses the same skills, creates the emotional highs and lows, but the story is a sketch. It’s a quicksilver. There are very few books written on the art of storytelling, how to grip listeners, how to get a group of people together, and amuse them. No costumes, no makeup, no nothing, just you and your voice, and your powerful ability to take them anywhere, to transform their lives, if only for minutes.

Rewrite the memoir of Michael Jackson into a profile.

Answer:

He has always wanted to be able to tell stories that came from his soul.

He would like to sit by the fire and tell people stories that make them see pictures, that make them cry and laugh, that take them anywhere emotionally with something as deceptively simple as words. He’d like to tell tales to move their souls and transform them. He has always wanted to be able to do that. He wants people to imagine how the great writers must feel, knowing they have that power. He sometimes feels he could do it. It’s something he’d like to develop. He claims that, in a way, songwriting uses the same skills, creates the emotional highs and lows, but the story is a sketch. He explains that there are very few books written on the art of storytelling, how to grip listeners, how to get a group of people together and amuse them. Only a voice and the powerful ability to take people anywhere, to transform their lives, if only for minutes.

Explanation:

A memoir is a text from someone who´s talking about himself, so the first person is used. A profile is a text that provides information about others, so the third person is used.

What are two strategies the speaker uses to develop the point that voluntour opportunities are not legitimate ways to learn about other cultures?
Expert testimony
Metaphor
Personification
Repetition
Statistics

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Answer: Expert testimony and Metaphor

Explanation: Expert testimony is correct, its just the repetition is not.

Repetition is like when it is repeated:

Example: King repeats “We cannot” followed by “we are not” and “we will not” to build emotion and reveal his steadfast commitment to the cause.

Thats why the other person got it wrong, but if u put Expert testimony and Metaphor, you would get it right.

I promise.

I've been trying to get this question right for the longest time because all the other people kept putting different answers and none of them were correct.

But I promise u, this is correct.

The only thing u have to do is to make sure the questions and answers are the same.

Good luck

Answer:

expert testimony and metaphor

Explanation:

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

write an Expository Essay on Why does a positive attitude helps a person be successful? font 14 1 page this is alot of points please do it right f

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Answer:

Explanation:A positive attitude helps you cope more easily with the daily affairs of life. It brings optimism into your life, and makes it easier to avoid worries and negative thinking. If you adopt it as a way of life, it would bring constructive changes into your life, and makes them happier, brighter and more successful.

With a positive attitude you see the bright side of life, become optimistic, and expect the best to happen. It is certainly a state of mind that is well worth developing.

Positive attitude manifests in the following ways:

Positive thinking.

Constructive thinking.

Creative thinking.

Optimism.

Motivation and energy to do things and accomplish goals.

An attitude of happiness.

A positive frame of mind can help you in many ways, such as:

Expecting success and not failure.

Making you feel inspired.

It gives you the strength not to give up, if you encounter obstacles on your way.

It makes you look at failure and problems as blessings in disguise.

Believing in yourself and in your abilities.>

Enables you to show self-esteem and confidence.

You look for solutions, instead of dwelling on problems.

You see and recognize opportunities.

A positive attitude leads to happiness and success and can change your whole life. If you look at the bright side of life, your whole life becomes filled with light. This light affects not only you and the way you look at the world, but it also affects your environment and the people around you.

If this attitude is strong enough, it becomes contagious. It's as if you radiate light around you.

Answer:

The one on top just copied and pasted... Might as well do the same thing cause in reality there wasnt any help! Just saying.

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