Read the following passage, which is lacking in vivid description, imagery, and dialogue. Rewrite the passage to include description and dialogue in a way that helps convey a nervous tone.

My brother Felipe and I walked up to the abandoned house at the end of the street. Felipe opened the gate, and we walked forward. We walked all the way up to the door and knocked, but no one answered. I leaned over the railing and looked in the window, and it was pretty empty in there. Then there was a noise inside the house, and we left.​

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Answer 1

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My brother Felipe and I walked up to a creped abandoned house at the end of the street. Felipe opened the rusted iron gate, and we walked forward. We walked all the way up to the old banish door and knocked, but no one answered. I leaned over the rusted railing and looked in the window, and it was pretty empty in there. Then there was an animus screeching noise coming from inside the house, out of tarred we left.


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Can someone write me a 5 paragraph essay of why we should get vaccinated.
Please do not write random answers i will report you
IM NOT ASKING YOUR OPINION JUST ANSWER THE QUESTION
1- Introduction
2- Body/ reasoning
3- Body/ reasoning
4- Body/ reasoning
5- Conclusion

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Why should we all get vaccinated. There are many reasons such as health benefits and more.

We should get vaccinated because it helps keep us from getting certain virus and diseases. The vaccine prevents this because a doctor injects dormant cells into our body and out immune system fight the cells but we can’t get sick since they are dormant and because of that our body builds up an immunity to whatever viruses cells they injected.

Another reason we should get vaccinated is probably the most important reason. It will prevent outbreaks and pandemics such as the current pandemic we are in. A pandemic that was ended by vaccines was the Polio pandemic. Polio damaged nerves preventing people from moving and breathing. But vaccines of the dormant cells helped build an immunity for people and eventually the virus had no one to spread to and was eradicated.

My last reason why we should get vaccinated is that it has many health benefits. It prevents us from getting lifelong diseases and viruses such as polio. Once you had polio your nerves were permanently damaged. There are people who had polio in the 1950s who still have to live in a tube to help them breath.

In conclusion we should get vaccinated because it has many health benefits. And because it also helps keep us safe and other safe and it may stop the next big pandemic.


You may need to make the introduction longer and fix a few mistakes but that’s a good rough draft.

For K12 Students

Read the sentence from Act II of Twelfth Night.

I know this letter will make a contemplative idiot of him.

What is the meaning of contemplative?


cautious

silly

generous

thoughtful

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Answer: contemplative means thoughtful

Explanation:I know this letter will make a contemplative idiot of him. This means I think the line meaning is the person ( means the one who got the letter ) will not able to understand this letter. He will think but it is not possible to understand the letter by him

Am i right. If I am right press the button of brainliest answer

Answer:

contemplative means thoughtful

Explanation:

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Read this sentence from "President Obama's National Address to America's Schoolchildren."

And even when you're struggling, even when you're discouraged, and you feel like other people have given up on you, don't ever give up on yourself…

What does the word discouraged mean?


A. very frightened

B. not hesitating

C. not hopeful

D. out of control

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C because it does so yeah
I believe it is C because not hopeful is basically the definition of discouraged

LaPeach Elementary School uses 4000 pencils each year. The school has 500 students. What is the unit rate per student?

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Answer:

The unit rate will be 8 pencils/student (read "8 pencils per student)

Explanation:

Read the sentence from Navita’s argumentative essay on the Columbian Exchange.

"Europeans didn't understand that native peoples couldn't fight off certain diseases.”

How can Navita best revise the sentence so it has a more formal tone?

Europeans didn't get that native peoples couldn't fight off certain diseases.
Europeans did not understand that native peoples could not fight off certain diseases.
Europeans were mean and did not get that native peoples could not fight diseases.
Europeans, unlike you and me didn't understand that native peoples had no ability to fight off diseases

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The second sentence is the most formal

Answer:

D

Explanation:

I need help with this 3paragraph essay and I don't exactly how I should start it is about Why should teen be able to play so-called dangerous sports.
Any ideas

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Answer:

Teens are very smart and outgoing,were young ond out going and curagouse and funny although when it comes to sports the person you might want to ask is a teen. Nobody wants to watch and old man play sports its weird and creepy if you ask  me. We want fun and loving teens heres reasons why teens should play dangerous sports.

a reasoExplanation:

here you go :D its not the best but its something xd

Answer:

Because they are putting there own lives in danger and not someone elses life.

Explanation:

They are not hurting anyone but themselves.

Mai skated miles, and Clare skated 3/5 farther than that. Select 1 expression that show how far Clare skated. **HINT: Clare skated MORE than Mai.


A. 8/5
B. 1 3/5
C. 13/5

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The answer is B because I am not sure
I’m pretty sure it’s c

I.

Above lone woodland ways that led
To dells the stealthy twilights tread
The west was hot geranium red;
And still, and still,
Along old lanes the locusts sow
With clustered pearls the Maytimes know,
Deep in the crimson afterglow,
We heard the homeward cattle low,
And then the far-off, far-off woe
Of "whippoorwill!" of "whippoorwill!"

II.

Beneath the idle beechen boughs
We heard the far bells of the cows
Come slowly jangling towards the house;
And still, and still,
Beyond the light that would not die
Out of the scarlet-haunted sky;
Beyond the evening-star's white eye
Of glittering chalcedony,
Drained out of dusk the plaintive cry
Of "whippoorwill," of "whippoorwill."

III.

And in the city oft, when swims
The pale moon o'er the smoke that dims
Its disc, I dream of wildwood limbs;
And still, and still,
I seem to hear, where shadows grope
Mid ferns and flowers that dewdrops rope,
Lost in faint deeps of heliotrope
Above the clover-sweetened slope,
Retreat, despairing, past all hope,
The whippoorwill, the whippoorwill.

Whippoorwill - a nocturnal bird with a distinctive call that is suggestive of its name

Question 1
Part A

What is a theme of “The Whippoorwill?


People sometimes long for what they cannot have.

In order to move forward, people must leave the past behind.

Nature soothes the heart and calms the mind.

There is a balance between nature and the city.
Question 2
Part B

How does the theme in Part A develop in the poem?


The woeful sound of the whippoorwill echos the despair the speaker feels living in the city.

The speaker thinks he hears the sound of the whippoorwill while walking in the city.

The city sky is filled with cloudy, gray smoke and it makes the speaker feel sad that the moon is hidden.

The speaker recalls his fondest memories of nature while living in the city.

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Answer:

he Whippoorwill by Madison Julius Cawein I. Above lone woodland ways that led To dells the stealthy twilights tread The west was hot geranium red; And still, and still, Along old lanes the locusts sow With clustered pearls the Maytimes know, Deep in the crimson afterglow, We heard the homeward cattle low, And then the far-off, far-off woe

Explanation:

Refer to Inside Out and Back Again for a complete version of this text.
In the story, Hà and Pink Boy meet face to face. When he tries to hit her, Hà stands up to him and he falls in pain. Instead of feeling victorious, Hà pities Pink Boy.
How does this response develop a theme in the story?
Hà learns that getting revenge is the only way to stop abuse from others.
Hà realizes that revenge rarely feels as good as one imagines it will.
It highlights the importance of learning self-defense at a young age.
It demonstrates that most problems can be resolved by using force.

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Answer:

I'm not sure but i think it would be....

Ha realizes that revenge rarely feels as good as one imagines it will.

Explanation:

I hope it is correct! <3

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Answer:

Ha realizes that revenge rarely feels as good as one imagines it will.

Explanation:

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“Every second, the equivalent of a dump truck’s worth of clothing is thrown out worldwide.” Does that statistic surprise you? Why or why not? *

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I would say this, “Yes, I am surprised by this because that is a very large amount of clothing that is just going to waste and isn’t being used. Throwing out that much clothing is harming the environment, especially when the clothes could go to people in need.”
Yes, because it shows that humans toss aside potentially helpful materials at an alarming rate, and it also shows the amount of waste that could otherwise go to people in need.

Can anyone help me out!

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Answer:

letter D po aggression or willingness to fight :)

Explanation:

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Answer:

The answer is D) Aggression or willingness to fight.

Explanation:

Bellicose is used to describe something/someone who is aggressive. For example, "Don't have a bellicose attitude when speaking to your teachers, or else they might send you to the principal's office."

Hope this helps! Have a good day, good luck on your assignment. :)

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Answer:

I want it please :)

Explanation:

Answer:

hi uh i would love to have it but its up to you

Explanation:

You teacher wants you to handwrite your essay but you want to type it; try to persuade him/her to let you type it.
How would you do this

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Answer:

hey

Explanation:

I would say miss her name would you mind if I typed it instead I know I will more efficient and focused if I typed it. you can also add more backed up reasons why

NEED THIS ASAP Ill mark brainliest on the best answer The author, Robert Cormier, reveals a great deal about Mike in this story, but he doesn’t tell us why Mike shaves off his moustache. Based on events in the story, why do you think he shaved? Provide evidence from the text to support your response.

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Yes he doesn’t want his grandmother to think he is his grandfather Micheal who has passed away.

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Use the text of the opinion piece, "What's for Lunch," and your completed graphic organizer to answer the question below. Include evidence from the article to support your answer. Do you think this author has an agenda? If so, what is it? If not, what is the purpose of her article? Does she achieve her purpose?


What’s for Lunch?

Marcia Amidon Lusted


Zachary Maxwell was tired of trying to explain to his parents why he wanted to bring lunch to school instead of eating hot lunch. They couldn’t understand why he didn’t want to eat the gourmet food described on the school’s online menu, which sounded both nutritious and interesting. Zachary just couldn’t convince them that the food wasn’t as great as it sounded. So in the fall of 2011, he began sneaking a small video camera into the cafeteria at his school, to show his parents what the lunches were really like. Six months and 75 school lunches later, Zachary made a documentary film about his lunch called Yuck: A 4th Grader’s Short Documentary About School Lunch.

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Which one is not a benefit to

employee which results through

positive attitude of an employee

Select one:

a. Job security

b. Promotion

c. Less stress

d. Enjoying life

= PromotionWhich one is not a benefit to

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positive attitude of an employee

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a. Job security

b. Promotion

c. Less stress

d. Enjoying life

= PromotionWhich one is not a benefit to

employee which results through

positive attitude of an employee

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a. Job security

b. Promotion

c. Less stress

d. Enjoying life

= PromotionWhich one is not a benefit to

employee which results through

positive attitude of an employee

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a. Job security

b. Promotion

c. Less stress

d. Enjoying life

= PromotionWhich one is not a benefit to

employee which results through

positive attitude of an employee

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a. Job security

b. Promotion

c. Less stress

d. Enjoying life

= PromotionWhich one is not a benefit to

employee which results through

positive attitude of an employee

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a. Job security

b. Promotion

c. Less stress

d. Enjoying life

= PromotionWhich one is not a benefit to

employee which results through

positive attitude of an employee

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a. Job security

b. Promotion

c. Less stress

d. Enjoying life

= PromotionWhich one is not a benefit to

employee which results through

positive attitude of an employee

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a. Job security

b. Promotion

c. Less stress

d. Enjoying life

= PromotionWhich one is not a benefit to

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positive attitude of an employee

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b. Promotion

c. Less stress

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= PromotionWhich one is not a benefit to

employee which results through

positive attitude of an employee

Select one:

a. Job security

b. Promotion

c. Less stress

d. Enjoying life

= Promotion

oh, and thx for the 400 pts

Wednesday morning, the Frankfurt Book Fair opened its doors. Over 280,000 visitors from all over came to Frankfurt, Germany for this event. This is the biggest book fair in the world. It also has the most visited book publishing website in the world. The German Publishers and Booksellers Association runs the fair. The association says that the book market is doing very well. Over 100 countries and almost 7,500 people are showing books at the fair this year. There are over 100,000 new books being shown out of nearly 400,000 books at the fair. Prizes are given to authors and publishers at the fair. There are also meetings about new ways to present books to the public.

Which statement best supports the idea that books are very popular?
A.
Authors and publishers can get prizes at this large book fair.
B.
The Frankfurt Book Fair has the world's most visited website.
C.
Over 280,000 visitors came to the book fair on opening day.
D.
There are many new ways to present books to the public.

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Thr answer is C do you need an explanation

Answer:

Учим цвета-Разноцветные яйца на ферме привет ты кака и это Б добро пожаловать vпривет ты кака и это Б добро пожаловать

Explanation:

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Can someone write a small summary of something they would write in response to this question? Or some examples of things I could write about? Thanks!!

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Recall a time when you observed something closely and in great detail. What was it? What did you learn? Write a narrative of your experience using descriptions that capture the mood of this event.

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you could write about a pretty place you have been too! something like this maybe?


I would say one of the most prettiest places I have seen is a beach in Virginia. To get there, you had to walk a couple of miles through a beautiful forest. The forest was so green and the heat of the sun was very hot but the trees covered us with cool shade. Once we got there, we relaxed and cooled off in the water. I felt happy and calm, I would love to do it again some time!

Answer:

A year or so ago my father, my brother, and I went on a trip to point Reyes.( in California) we have to travel through a few towns and in one of towns at a Walgreens there was a large amount of ducks and Chickens wandering around the area. It was quite the sight. We then have to drive through some forestry areas to get to point Reyes. The road was dirt and only one way. Most of the time in the left side of the road it was a sheer drop. It was a bit scary but also gorgeous. It was nothing compared when we finally made it to point Reyes. It was a light house. It wasn’t open at the time but we went anyways. The sight of the ocean was absolutely breathtaking. It was a sheer drop at the end of the lighthouse and with this fenced off area so you can look at the ocean. It was extremely windy and the ocean was pounding at the rocky cliffs below. It was the prettiest thing I’ve ever seen.

Explanation:

Part A: How does the section regarding entertainment in America contribute the the development of ideas in the text?

Group of answer choices

It proves Americans were unable to afford basic necessities.

It shows how the entertainment industry used the Great Depression to their advantage.

It shows how hard the Great Depression was on all businesses.

It emphasizes how the Great Depression affected all aspects of life.

PLS ANSWER THESE TWO QUESTIONS

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Answer:

The Great Depression was the worst economic downturn in US history. It began in 1929 and did not abate until the end of the 1930s.

The stock market crash of October 1929 signaled the beginning of the Great Depression. By 1933, unemployment was at 25 percent and more than 5,000 banks had gone out of business.

Although President Herbert Hoover attempted to spark growth in the economy through measures like the Reconstruction Finance Corporation, these measures did little to solve the crisis.

Franklin Roosevelt was elected president in November 1932. Inaugurated as president in March 1933, Roosevelt’s New Deal offered a new approach to the Great Depression.

Explanation:

I have no explanation :) I'm sure of it

my hands are tired of typing because of it

I'm sorry if this is too much to write...

Using the chart for guidance, under which category would you put cross-country skiing? a. aerobics c. balance/flexibility b. strength d. none of the above

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D - None of the above
either B or D xbndebja

Michael's scraped elbows were nothing compared to his bloody knees.
Find the participle: Elbows, Nothing, Bloody, Scraped.

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The participle is scraped

Figurative language is language that(1 point)

goes beyond the words’ literal meanings.

is made up of words that contradict each other.

are words that have multiple meanings.

explains the literal meaning of words.

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

goes beyond the words’ literal meanings.

thats the answer hope it helped <3. also can I have brainliest maybe? I’m sorry if it sound like I’m begging but ya don’t have to.

It is A

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Write a 1 to 2 paragraph evaluation of the essay titled "Take Another Look at Electric Cars". Use your graphic organizer and include textual evidence.

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Answer:

Explanation:

other maintenance fees. One government study estimated that electric-car drivers will save over 40 percent in annual maintenance fees.

One of the biggest arguments against electric cars has been their limited range. Electric cars do have a shorter range, but that range is plenty for most drivers. The majority of American drivers travel less than 35 miles a day, and the average electric car has a range of about 100 miles on a full charge. Charging the car at home each night will provide enough power for daily driving and allow drivers to save time by avoiding stops at the gas station. And, as the number of electric cars on the road increases, more businesses and employers will install charging stations for their customers and employees, which will make charging a vehicle even easier.

An electric car may not be for everyone, but they have evolved beyond their original restrictions. With a purchase price that is comparable to a gas car, and reduced fuel and maintenance fees, anyone who is purchasing a new car should seriously consider an electric car.

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The police officer asked April and (I, me) if we saw the accident.
I or me???

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Answer:

I

Explanation:

the police officer asked April and me doesn't make sense it sounds better if you say the police officer asked April and I.

the answers is I good luck

if you were black and lived during the jim crow era, what do you think you’d find the hardest to live with and why?

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Answer:

If I was african American in 1980’s the hardest thing to live wa probably the segregation. Segregation parted people with “colored” skin tone and gave the different places to do there things ..... fo r example African Americans went to different schools then whites they had different busses and different stores... sometimes you would see signs hanging saying “white only” which meant the African Americans where not allowed, sometimes when African Americans disobeyed these “rules” they where beaten, hung, shot at.... and more sometimes African American famlies where threatened as well.

Explanation:

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Probably slavery and freedom caring for your families is really hard and difficult.

!GIVING 30 POINTS! Read the following excerpt from The First Men in the Moon then answer the question below.

"Like this." I imitated his buzzing noise. He looked at me, and it was evident the buzzing awakened distaste. "Do I do that?" he asked.
What is this excerpt an example of?

stereotyping
indirect characterization
round character
direct characterization

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Answer:

Indirect characterization

Explanation:

If you know that lions are dangerous to people, and you read that lions are losing habitat due to human settlements, what inference should you make?

Lions are running away from humans.
Lions will go extinct soon.
Humans are giving the lions diseases.
Humans are killing or driving away the lions from their settlements.

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Answer:

d

Explanation:

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The inference that we should make is that humans are killing or driving away the lions from their settlements. The correct option is d.

What do you understand by inference?

Inference can be understood as the steps in reasoning, moving from premises to logical consequences; etymologically, the word infer means to carry forward. Inference is theoretically traditionally divided into deduction and induction, a distinction that in Europe dates at least to Aristotle.

The deduction is inference deriving logical conclusions from premises known or assumed to be true, with the laws of valid inference being studied in logic. Induction is an inference from particular evidence to a universal conclusion. A third type of inference is sometimes distinguished, notably by Charles Sanders Peirce, contradistinguished abduction from induction. Various fields study how inference is done in practice. The human inference is traditionally studied within the fields of logic, argumentation studies, and cognitive psychology.

Statistical inference uses mathematics to conclude the presence of uncertainty.

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Which statement best explains how effectively the passage uses vivid description?
The one place I had longed to visit ever since we'd moved to our new home was the public library. But as I stood before the tiny building, was worried. I envisioned a few shelves sparsely lined with books and maybe a hard-backed chair shoved into the corner. When I pulled open the door, I let out a happy gasp. Books blanketed every inch of space, floor to ceiling, creating a colorful patchwork. In the corners were cozy reading nooks occupied by earnest readers. The musty smell of well-worn pages came toward me, and I breathed deeply. It was the smell of paradise.​

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

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The statement which best explains how effectively the passage uses vivid description is B. The vivid description is effective because it appeals to the senses of smell and sight in order to create an appreciative tone.

Definition of vivid

1 of a color: very strong: very high in chroma. 2: having the appearance of vigorous life or freshness: lively a vivid sketch. 3: producing a strong or clear impression on the senses: sharp, intense specifically: producing distinct mental images and a vivid description.

What are vivid descriptive words?

Vivid is an adjective that describes a bold and bright color, an intense feeling, or an image in your mind that is so clear you can almost touch it. Sometimes you have a vivid dream that feels so real that even when you wake up, you can't tell if the dream is really over.

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after ms.whatsit transformes her self what animal is she

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a ape lallaalalala 20 characters
centaur
Whatsit when she changes form. Mrs Whatsit turns into a centaur like creature with wings made of rainbows. What is the black Thing Mrs Whatsit shows the children on Uriel? The black Thing is Evil, the Powers of Darkness, OR the Thing Meg's father is fighting.

Can someone plz help me with this!

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Answer:

After "late".

Unless the caterer is late, this banquet should go off without a hitch.

Explanation:

If you read this sentence out loud, you would give a slight pause after "late", indicating a comma.

Hope this helps!

the comma should go after late!!

why does the narrator include the following detail in the story ´he was immediately fascinated by the beautiful stranger´

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Answer: its the fourth one

Explanation:

Answer:

Number 3

Explanation:

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