Read the run-on sentence. Justin rushed through the obstacle course he couldn't make it over the final obstacle in time. What is the best way to revise the sentence?

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Answer 1

The best way to fix a run-on sentence is to add a comma, conjunction, or period. In this case, separating the sentence into 2 with a period is the best option:

Justin rushed through the obstacle course. He couldn't make it over the final obstacle in time.

Hope this helps! Good luck! :)

Answer 2

Answer:

Justin rushed through the obstacle but, he couldn't make it over the final obstacle in time.

Explanation:

Just add a conjunction to run on sentences.


Related Questions

Where did the Socs find Johnny and Ponyboy after Ponyboy was hit?



A baseball field


A lake


A pool


A park

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Answer:

A Park

Explanation:

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I can’t see the picture ...

When a child says, “I don’t see why I have to know that; I can’t remember it anyway,” he is voicing a very reasonable protest. Of course, there are plenty of instances of wilful shirking, where a little effort can overcome the slackness of memory; but every teacher who is honest enough to reckon with himself knows he cannot give a sensible reason why things are to be taught which have so little to do with the child’s life that to-morrow, or the day after examination, they will be forgotten; things which he himself could not remember were he not repeating them year in and year out, as a matter of his trade. And every teacher who has thought at all for himself about the essential nature of the young humanity he is dealing with, knows that six hours of daily herding and in-penning of young, active bodies and limbs, accompanied by the additional injunction that no feet are to be shuffled, no whispers exchanged, and no paper wads thrown, is a frightful violation of all the laws of young life. Any gardener who should attempt to raise healthy, beautiful, and fruitful plants by outraging all those plants’ instinctive wants and searchings, would meet as his reward—sickly plants, ugly plants, sterile plants, dead plants. He will not do it; he will watch very carefully to see whether they like much sunlight, or considerable shade, whether they thrive on much water or get drowned in it, whether they like sandy soil, or fat mucky soil; the plant itself will indicate to him when he is doing the right thing. And every gardener will watch for indications with great anxiety. If he finds the plant revolts against his experiments, he will desist at once, and try something else; if he finds it thrives, he will emphasize the particular treatment so long as it seems beneficial. But what he will surely not do, will be to prepare a certain area of ground all just alike, with equal chances of sun and amount of moisture in every part, and then plant everything together without discrimination,—mighty close together!—saying beforehand, “If plants don’t want to thrive on this, they ought to want to; and if they are stubborn about it, they must be made to.”

In the second sentence of this paragraph, the repetition of the word “things” primarily serves to:

A) qualify a claim by acknowledging an exception to it
B) portray contrasting viewpoints as equally legitimate
C) clarify an argument by restating it in simpler terms
D) illustrate a generalization with a particular case
E) strengthen an assertion by broadening its implications

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pretty sure it’s E. also how did you type out the whole thing :o

Answer:e

Explanation:

which central idea is best supported in "My Childhood Home I see again?

My childhood home I see again,
And sadden with the view;
And still, as memory crowds my brain,
There's pleasure in it too.

O Memory! thou midway world
'Twixt earth and paradise,
Where things decayed and loved ones lost
In dreamy shadows rise,

And, freed from all that's earthly vile,
Seem hallowed, pure, and bright,
Like scenes in some enchanted isle
All bathed in liquid light.

As dusky mountains please the eye
When twilight chases day;
As bugle-notes that, passing by,
In distance die away;

As leaving some grand waterfall,
We, lingering, list its roar—
So memory will hallow all
We've known, but know no more.

Near twenty years have passed away
Since here I bid farewell
To woods and fields, and scenes of play,
And playmates loved so well.

Where many were, but few remain
Of old familiar things;
But seeing them, to mind again
The lost and absent brings.

The friends I left that parting day,
How changed, as time has sped!
Young childhood grown, strong manhood gray,
And half of all are dead.

I hear the loved survivors tell
How nought from death could save,
Till every sound appears a knell,
And every spot a grave.

I range the fields with pensive tread,
And pace the hollow rooms,
And feel (companion of the dead)
I'm living in the tombs.
This poem is in the public domain.

A.reflecting on the past can create a range of emotions
B.the natural world provides comfort in sad times
C.transformation in life can occur very quickly
D.unimportant details can detract from enjoying the present

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Answer:

a

Explanation:

a summary should have the same length as the original text

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Answer:

One-third

Explanation:

Synonyms and antonyms! Help please

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Answer:

16. generic/proprietary - antonyms

17. domestic/private - synonyms

18. ambitious/desire - synonyms

19. prestigious/reputable - synonyms

20. orderly/untidy - antonyms

Explanation:

Antonyms refer to words that are opposite in meaning to other words. Simply put that an antonym is the opposite of another word. While synonyms are words or phrases that means same thing or nearly means the same thing as the word.

From the given words, we discover that generic and proprietary are opposite words. The context in which generic is used as the opposite of proprietary is when it means not having a brand name. So, proprietary is the opposite.

Domestic and private, ambitious and desire and prestigious and reputable are synonymous while orderly and untidy are opposite.

what is the purpose of a semicolon

A) to to separate a subordinate clause from an independent

B) to separate two independent clauses that are closely related

C) to replace a comma between two independent clauses

D) to replace a colon between two independent clauses

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Answer:

B = to separate two independent clauses that are closely related.

* An example:

there are lots of people, who have the virus here; we are in lockdown. ( very close to so / therefore)

Write a TDA to answer the following question:

The Red Badge of Courage -- How did the author use irony to show Henry's unrealistic view of himself and the world?

The Secret Garden --Explain the following quote from the novel and how it relates to Mary's life. "Where you tend a
rose, my lad, a thistle can not grow." PLEASE I NEED THIS ASAP

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Answer:

“The quote ‘Where you tend a rose my lad a thistle can not grow’ means when you think good thoughts bad ones won't come in. When Colin was always thinking he was going to die and become a hunchback he was weak and ill. When Colin thought good thoughts he became stronger, he walked, and he also beat Mary in a race. He also started thinking that he was going to live forever. When he stood, Mary was telling him constantly ‘You can do it.’ That got the positive thoughts into his head. There is a humongous difference between old Mary and new Mary. Old Mary had bad thoughts so she looked horrible and was a spoiled brat. New Mary is healthy, smart, and encouraging. She helps Colin when he is in tantrums. Colin isn't so ashamed of himself now that he can stand. He went up to his father and told him he was going to be a strong living boy. It says ‘Thoughts are as powerful as batteries. They can be as good as sunlight or as bad as poison.’”

Hope this helps!

Explanation:

For red garden The author uses irony in one place  at the end of the second day Henry is still full of delusion and egocentricity; the irony is that he does not seem to ever have a grasp on who he really is while he tells himself repeatedly that he is a hero and a man. Crane's tone is ironic throughout, and provides a layer of complexity to the novel.

The quotes means two things cannot be at one place it relates to her life because she is saying she only needs positive thoughts not mixed with negative

Pls help me if your good at English ill mark brainliest:)

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

Pigeon's do not gamble

Answer:

The pigeon gambled for a crust of bread.

Explanation:

A pigeon can't gamble.

Why does Stick feel so forced to leave the house?

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Answer: Because you feed him Lisinopril

Explanation:

Answer:i need more info to answer that

Explanation:

In the conclusion, explain what three strategies the writer’s technique accomplishes in this paragraph.

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Answer:

Down below hope it helps :)

Explanation:

In the conclusion paragraph, the writer restates their reasonings that were shown in both the thesis and their body paragraphs in another way. By doing this, the reader is able to close off by restating his reasonings, and explain their point of view and why it's correct one last time before the reader finishes off.

The musician Atif Aslam has agreed to visit your school for an hour and meet the students in person. Your Principal has asked you to record the preparations of his visit in the form of a report

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Answer:

whats the question

Explanation:

How does the author organize ideas in the second passage

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Answer:

dang it someone else allready answerd

Explanation:

You are going to write at least one paragraph in English about an important issue.



Think about what you will write before you begin writing.

State your opinion clearly and give two or more reasons to support your opinion.

The paragraph should include at least three complete sentences.

Check your writing for correct grammar, capital letters, punctuation, and spelling.



Your parents have agreed to buy you a bike with the exception of wearing a helmet.


Do you think that it is a good idea to wear a helmet while riding a bike? Write at least one paragraph in support of your opinion to give to your parents. Make sure you write at least three sentences and include your opinion and supporting reasons.

plz help me

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Answer:

Explanation:

This morning I hopped on my town bike, a 1956 Schwinn Tornado, and cruised 10 minutes to the coffee shop. I did not wear a helmet. I sipped an espresso, high-fived some friends, and excavated my inbox. Then I rode home and kitted up for a road ride. On the way out the door, I grabbed my helmet off the hook and plopped it on my head.If you’ve ever ridden a bike without a helmet, you’ve likely run into helmet scolds. They’ll tell you at length why you should never ride without one, about the risks and dangers. Don’t you know cycling is perilous, even for seasoned riders? They’ll come armed with statistics and tell you about that one time they crashed unexpectedly while pedaling around the block.

Are helmet advocates right? Should we always wear a helmet when we ride?

Forbes contributor and BikeBiz founder Carlton Reid doesn’t think so. In a column published on Monday, Reid lists the many activities he does without a helmet. He walks on icy sidewalks and cleans the gutters on his roof. If we don’t wear helmets for these daily but potentially deadly tasks, he argues, we shouldn’t bother when we ride a bike. The expectation that we should only.I think yes we should ride a bike while wearing helmet.

Can someone help me and I’ll give you a Brainly promise

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Answer:

People move their eyes continuously > The glasses can focus in fourteen milliseconds.

Peoples eyesight changes > One pair of glasses can adjust automatically.

People have to focus at multiple distances > The lenses can flex and bend.

Explanation:

The reading hints at which problem goes with each solution. Look out for those hints!

Write a message writing .

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Answer:

THIS IS YOUR ANSWER

PLZZZ MARK ME AS BRAINLIEST

Answer:

Dear Rishabh,

 I spoke to Joseph on the phone today, he wanted to remind you to get a cake for Ishan's birthday. He said they will meet outside Ishan's house at 7:00 p.m. He wants you to call him before you leave.

Explanation:

Im a writer:). here you can copy & paste if its online.

Read the passage from A Room of One’s Own.

And one gathers from this enormous modern literature of confession and self-analysis that to write a work of genius is almost always a feat of prodigious difficulty. Everything is against the likelihood that it will come from the writer's mind whole and entire. Generally material circumstances are against it. Dogs will bark; people will interrupt; money must be made; health will break down.

What is the purpose of the rhetorical device used in the underlined sentence?

The parallel structure emphasizes the idea that creative work is much more challenging than other types of work.
The parallel structure emphasizes the idea that the creative process is easily and often interrupted by life’s events and obligations.
The understatement emphasizes the idea that creative work is more important than life’s everyday obligations.
The metaphor emphasizes the idea that the creative process is easily and often interrupted by life’s events and obligations.

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Answer:

B. The parallel structure emphasizes the idea that the creative process is easily and often interrupted by life’s events and obligations.

Explanation:

Answer:

the answer is B :)

Explanation:

I took the test on edge and it was right

Read the experts from heart of darkness what is the most likely purpose of this part of the story

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Answer:

man's inhumanity to man

Answer:

to describe the character’s conflict with the setting

Explanation:

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Write a paragraph comparing and contrasting two items. This can be about anything you want You must use at least six signal words (you can use the same word twice).

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Answer:

I will be comparing and contrasting Life and Death

Life and death are different in many ways.Life is when you are living and have a conciseness and death is something that is usally said to be a empty black with the said dead person having no conciseness

Explanation:

can anyone summarize life of pi chapters 1-14 (i’ll mark as brainliest)

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Refer the pic...And i hope u got the answer.

Do Mark me as brainliest pls.

why is evaluation an important thinking skill

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The ability to think critically about a matter—to analyze a question, situation, or problem down to its most basic parts—is what helps us evaluate the accuracy and truthfulness of statements, claims, and information we read and hear.

Question 6 of 10
Determine what the bolded word means from context clues in the passage.
Some defendants plead Insanity as their defense. For
example, their lawyers might say that they were crazy at
the time of the crime.
A. Saying someone was crazy as a defense
B. Pleading a defense
C. Defending craziness
D. Giving a defense

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Answer:

maybe

Explanation:

d

How does social class affect how people in different parts of Panem perceive the games? What are examples of how social classes bring people together in the games?

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Answer:

hi I hope my answer is helpful in anyway.

Explanation:

Social class affects people in different parts of Panem because the richer you are the less you see of the poor Districts, money is significant in the society of Panem. The richer you are in the world of Panem the less you need to worry about the poor people at the bottom because they mean nothing to you. Capitol residents have often been said to treat the Hunger Games-like a celebrated sporting event and a highly anticipated source of entertainment and past time. It is like a reality show, the rich people at the top don’t think of how much the Districts have struggled, even if they did, they see it as a form of entrainment, like a dramatic back story in a TV show.

The people of the Districts are brought together in the games to fight each other, their social status is pretty much the same, inferior to the Capital. They can bond over it for a bit and may even find a way to rebel (as seen in the second book). Like how people with common ground can come together, the Districts come together because of the games and how they are forced to fight in them. The same with the Capital, the Capital residents come together because of the games, giving money and items to their favorite triubutes, and betting on which one will win.

Evaluate the author’s argument that the use of artificial sweeteners is a controversial issue. Consider the author’s reasoning and use of evidence, and identify examples of irrelevant evidence and problematic reasoning. Use specific information from the text to develop your response.

Could someone please give me an example of a response to this? From any passage?
I'd also like what 'Consider the author’s reasoning and use of evidence, and identify examples of irrelevant evidence and problematic reasoning.' means.
This needs to be due today!!!

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Answer: Artificial Sweetners. Artificial sweeteners were made for people who cannot eat sugar or who want to cut down on calories from sugary foods. After many years of use, artificial sweeteners are still controversial. Some people think that they are good because they do not cause cavities and may help them lose weight.

Explanation:   Make a postive vs negative effect on how bad it is and how great it tastes. EXAMPLE: Artificial sweeteners have been scrutinized intensely for decades. Critics of artificial sweeteners say that they cause a variety of health problems, including cancer. That's largely because of studies dating to the 1970s that linked the artificial sweetener saccharin to bladder cancer in laboratory rats. EXAMPLE 2: “Non-nutritive sweeteners are far more potent than table sugar and high-fructose corn syrup. A miniscule amount produces a sweet taste comparable to that of sugar, without comparable calories.

can someone give me an bioagrapghy of lewis howard laitemeir

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Answer:

can yOu GiVe Me sOmE wAtEr

Explanation:

Why does the man's second fire go out?
A. Several gusts of wind blow out the fire.
B. Snow from the tree branches falls on it.
C. The dog accidentally kicks snow on it.
O D. The man loses his balance and falls on it.

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Answer:

Explanation:

Correct answer: Snow from the tree breaches falls on it.

Answer:

B " snow from the tree branches falls on it."

Explanation:

Reeves, Amy. "Biogen's MS Drug Sales Light, Alzheimer's Data Pushed Back." Investor's Business Daily 27 Apr. 2015: A1. Print.

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Answer:

This is an example of a bibliographic reference made by the APA format.

Explanation:

The bibliographic reference is a very important element of academic work because it allows the author to show the works of other authors that were used as a research source. The standard format for presenting bibliographic references is called APA format. This format states that the reference must be made with the following information: Author's last name + author's name + book title + publisher name + publication date.

An example of this format was shown in the question above.

Why do the townspeople think Eric is a thief?
Group of answer choices

Randolph the silversmith has identified him.

People think he is wearing a nobleman's stolen cape.

Eric has an MP3 player which looks like it's made from silver.

Eric is seen with silver that belongs to the silversmith

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

At the end of the story it shows that Eric woke up without the MP3 player which tells The reader that since they thought of him being the theif in his dream.. he is really confused

Answer:

c

Explanation:

what does liberty mean to you in your own life? can someone give you your liberty (freedom) can someone take away your liberty?


can somebody please help me own words please.

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if you’re religious, you have liberty to practice your religion. religious liberty is given to us through the first amendment of the us constitution.

Choose the missing prefix.
A person who is disliked by many people is
_popular.
1. mis
02. un
3. il
4. re

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2. Un

A person who is dislike by many people is Unpopular.
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