Someone help me I wrote a poem and can someone tell me something I should add or edit



I recall a moment when I was once scared of the ocean at night
Frightened of what may be there since there was no sight
I seemed to ask myself why am I afraid? The water was not deep
What am I afraid of ? I took a few steps in and stopped I couldn’t keep going
I felt the shells and with the fear of sea creatures so I got out right away
I was too scared that I was thinking in my head “maybe tomorrow but not today”
Feared the water
Feared the darkness
Feared the creatures
Feared dying
Someone once said “If you don't do wild things while you're young, You'll have nothing to smile about when you're old” and I took that risk and don’t regret it

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Answer 1
Its good how it is .

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Select the correct answer.
Select the italicized word that is not capitalized correctly.
The children love to visit uncle Fred and to spend a few days in the hills of Arkansas.
A. The
B. uncle
C. hills
D. Arkansas

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Answer:

Unlce

Explanation:

because it is a part of the name so it becomes a proper noun

Answer:

YOUR ANSWER IS A: UNCLE

The word uncle is supposed to be capitalized before a name

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Which type of persuasion is the following example? "He has a track record
of success with this company, culminating in some of our most acclaimed
architecture to date and earning us Firm of the Year nine times in a row."

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Answer:

This is a persuasion example of ethos

Explanation:

"Ethos is used to demonstrate good character and credentials. The persuasion lies in the power and authority of the speaker. Classical orators used ethos, not to convince, but to fasten the already established rightness of their cause in the minds of their listeners." (Robinson)

Read the following article about a man who fell to Earth from a height of 40 kilometers, and then complete the notes on the opposite page.

THE MAN WHO FELL TO EARTH

On October 14, 2012, Felix Baumgartner made history as the man who fell to Earth from a height of almost 40 kilometers. During the fall, he became the first person to break the sound barrier on his own without the help of any machine. He made the highest and fastest jump in history, after going up in a capsule, similar to a very small spacecraft. The capsule was lifted by a helium balloon to an altitude of about 40 000 meters. Millions of people around the world watched the journey from pictures taken by a camera that was fixed to the capsule itself. When the capsule reached the required height, viewers could see what Felix saw as he looked down: the round, blue Earth, surrounded by the blackness of space. They then watched as Felix stepped into the empty darkness and fell for more than four minutes. During his fall, he reached a maximum speed of more than 1300 kilometers per hour.

The jump was not without challenging moments. For example, the engineers in charge of the mission considered stopping the jump when the glass shield of his helmet began to be covered with mist during the ascent. Later, a new crisis developed during the jump, when Felix began spinning out of control in the thin air of the stratosphere. Fortunately, as the atmosphere thickened, he managed to stop the spin and fall smoothly. He opened his parachute about one and a half kilometers above the ground and landed safely in the desert.

During the jump, Felix broke the altitude and speed records, which had been set half a century before by Joe Kittinger, a retired Air Force colonel, who is now more than eighty years old. It was Joe’s calm voice that guided Felix through some tense moments. Joe praised Felix for his great courage and determination. “Through Felix, we have fulfilled the aims of the mission. We wanted to test this spacesuit for its strength and protective qualities, and it has passed the test.”

The whole mission involved about 300 people, including engineers and scientists who had been working for five years on the project. Apart from breaking the altitude and speed records, the aim was to see how the equipment was affected by the loss of pressure at extreme heights. The information provided by the jump will help pilots and even space tourists survive in the future if they have to jump out of their spaceships in an emergency.

One particular problem that Felix Baumgartner discovered during tests was that he suffered from panic attacks when he was forced to spend hours inside the pressurized space suit and helmet. He was advised by experts to keep busy all the time in order to take his mind off the jump.

In addition, preparations for the jump did not always go smoothly. Several attempts to inflate the helium balloon, which would lift Felix in his capsule to the required height for the jump, had to be abandoned because of bad weather.

Finally, however, everything was prepared and the mission was completed. Viewers from all around the world watched the live video being broadcast both from the capsule and from mission control in Florida. There were a record eight million people watching the jump at the same time.

You are going to give a talk about Felix Baumgartner and his jump to your school science club. Prepare some notes to use as the basis for your talk.

Make short notes under each heading.

Statistical data about the jump

• The mission involved about 300 people

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Problems before and during the trip

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Aims of the mission

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Answer:

good article!

Explanation:

short essay on my greatest wish

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Answer:

What is your wish?

Main Points you should include:

Set Goals to get that wish, tell which type

How to achieve that goal

Why its your greatest wish

Will your wish affect anyone or anything?

If your wish were to become true how would it effect us if it could

What would the differences be if you had your wish come true

Would you take your wish for granted?

These are the main points you should include in your essay.

Read the excerpt from "Aunty Misery." La Tia Miseria was blamed by these people for their troubles, of course. Not wishing to be unfair, the old woman made a deal with her prisoner, Death: if he promised not ever to come for her again, she would give him his freedom. He agreed. And that is why there are two things you can always count on running into in this world: Misery and Death: La miseria y la muerte. Which element of an allegory is found in this excerpt?

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Read the excerpt from "Aunty Misery.”

La Tia Miseria was blamed by these people for their troubles, of course. Not wishing to be unfair, the old woman made a deal with her prisoner, Death: if he promised not ever to come for her again, she would give him his freedom. He agreed. And that is why there are two things you can always count on running into in this world: Misery and Death: La miseria y la muerte.

Which element of an allegory is found in this excerpt?  

A. The message of the story explains something about life.

B. The message of the story is written to frighten readers.

C. The message of the story is exaggerated for children.

D. The message of the story shows that death is miserable.

Answer:

The element of an allegory found in this excerpt is:

A. The message of the story explains something about life.

Explanation:

In an allegory, characters and events are symbols, that is, they represent and relate to something bigger than themselves and the story. Their meanings include life lessons or truths. In the case we are analyzing here, death and misery were transformed into characters and a plot was created to explain why we always find them in life. Death could not kill Misery because of a deal they made, which is why both things can happen to us. Therefore, the message of the story explains something about real life.

In a reply to a pen friend, write to him , describing how osun osogbo festival celebrated in Nigeria last year

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Answer:

what re u from or in nigeria

Explanation:

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Churchill firmly states the policy and his new administration. What other purposes might have been on Churchill’s mind when he drafted his speech? Use evidence to support your answer

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Answer:

Two other possible purposes for the speech are:

1. Churchill wanted to warn both politicians and the population about how quickly this new administration would have to move and plan.

2. Churchill wanted to prepare people's heart for the war while, at the same time, giving them hope for victory.

Explanation:

In his speech "Blood, Toil, Tears and Sweat," Prime Minister Winston Churchill announces the His Majesty the king asked him to form a new administration. However, that is not the only purpose of the speech. Churchill asks people, especially politicians, to be understanding when it comes to the lack of ceremony with which the changes in government are being done. The situation is grave, and it demands speedy action:

"I hope that any of my friends and colleagues, or former colleagues, who are affected by the political reconstruction, will make allowance, all allowance, for any lack of ceremony with which it has been necessary to act."

Churchill then moves on to speak of the war. He does not try to sugarcoat it. It will be brutal. However, he states that it is the nation's purpose to win, and that they will not stop until victory is gained:

"We have before us an ordeal of the most grievous kind. . . . You ask, what is our aim? I can answer in one word: It is victory, victory at all costs, victory in spite of all terror . . ."

Use the words in parentheses in the correct tense.​

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Answer:

1. Realized/Guilty

2. Played/Returned

3. Were done/Knew

4. Quit/Did

5. Has been/Visited

6. Was/Knew

7. Came/Read

8. Fought/Died

9. Heard/Is coming

10. It had been/Took

11. Entered/Read

12. Left/Started

13. Have not seen/ This sentence should be, "Where have you been?"

(If this is not correct, I apologize. I can't see any other way to answer this.)

14. Had not/Was not

15. Were married/Were

16. Walked/Followed

Explanation:

Always make sure the tense matches throughout the full sentence, paragraph and/or thought.

Always make sure the tense is correct for the time period referenced, whether its past, present or future.

What is the reasoning of tennis

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“The goal of tennis is to hit the ball over the net into the other player’s court. When the other player cannot return the ball, a point is won. The game is played with two people, it is called “singles”, and when it is played with four people, it is called “doubles.”

help help help help what is the main idea in this paragraph please help ​

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Answer:

The main idea is how trading first started before money was invented.

Explanation:

Everyone on the girls’ field hockey team worked as hard as they could to win the championships (mini-workout pronoun agreement)

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Explanation:

Finding and fixing subject-verb agreement errors is easy when you know what to look for. Review the basics and find out about the most common problem areas for subject-verb agreement mistakes. Then, get ideas for how to fix your errors.

1. Prepositional phrases should be
placed as
the word being
described as possible.
O far from
O close to
2. Identify the prepositional phrase in
this sentence: "Wendell went fishing
on Tuesday."
O Wendell went
O went fishing
Ofishing on
O on Tuesday
3. Does the 1st or 2nd sentence use the
best prepositional phrase placement?
"The pan on the stove needs to go
back in the cupboard." or "The pan
needs to go back in the cupboard on
the stove."
O the 1st
O the 2nd

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Answer:

1) Close to 2) On Tuesday 3) 1st

Explanation:

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1) Close to

2) On Tuesday

3) 1st

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During a play, there are usually intermissions between . . . Select one: Scenes Lines Both Acts and Scenes Acts

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You can download answer here

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Determining Importance Why is it crucial that people have confidence in the US court system?​

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Answer:

it is crucial that people have confidence in the US court system because it is one of the ruling powers of the united states and when people don't have confidence in it people will try to take power into their own hands. if the people don't believe that the courts have their best interest in mind they will do all that they can to make change whether that is a positive or a negative one.

PRESIDENT OBAMA'S REMARKS ON TRAYVON MARTIN RULING commonlit answer

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I think that you should have put the full thing LOL

What's the meaning of ,' Nightmare dressed like a daydream '?​

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Answer:

It means everythings going the right way but then it turns into hell

Explanation: Thats what I think it means or if it means something else

Answer

i think it means that something bad that you may think is fake really isnt

Explanation:

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Can anyone help me with these questions I need it to pass

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Answer:

Just one question, is this a test?

It is a British penny with King Edward VII in elegant profile, but his image has been defaced in what was then a criminal act. Stamped all over the king’s head in crude capitals are the words VOTES FOR WOMEN. This suffragette coin stands for all those who fought for the right to vote. Recent objects have been about nineteenth-century mass production and mass consumption – this one is about the rise of mass political engagement.

–A History of the World in 100 Objects,
Neil MacGregor

What technique does the author use to engage the reader?


What is the effect of this technique?

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Answer: he provides a description and it helps the reader visualize the coin

Explanation:

The technique that was used by the author to engage the readers is that he provided a description and it was vital in visualizing the coin.

Imagery simply means figurative language that is used in a literary work to evoke a mental image in the reader's mind.

It can be deduced that imagery was the technique that was used by the author to engage the readers is that he provided a description and it was vital in visualizing the coin.

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What is a God complex? Who is most likely to suffer from God complex ?

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Answer:

A God complex is an unshakable belief characterized by consistently inflated feeling of personal ability, privilege, or infallibility

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In the sentence below, what change must be made to correct the problem in punctuation?

The crowd of Mavericks fans was shouting in unison, "Defense"
A.
The sentence is punctuated correctly.
B.
add a question mark after Defense
C.
add an exclamation point after Defense
D.
add a comma after Defense

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

They are shouting it so most time, (like 98% of the time) If someone is shouting, and exclamation point would go after it.

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Your school will hold an election for student council officers. Many friends and teachers have asked you to run for class president. As part of your campaign, you will have to give a speech explaining how you would make life better for students at your school. Consider the needs and desires of students at your school and how they can best be met. Then write your campaign speech.

Which of these options is the best claim to address the prompt?



A.

The main thing I would do to make student life better is create new opportunities for students to have fun with their friends in class and outside of class.


B.

The qualities of a good leader are confidence, the ability to get along well with others, and strong decision-making skills, all of which I possess.


C.

The first way we can improve the school dress code is by adding photographs to the student handbook and school website.


D.

Have you ever experienced a problem at our school and wished there were someone who could help solve that problem?

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Answer:

A: The main thing I would do to make student life better is create new opportunities for students to have fun with their friends in class and outside of class.

Sarah has a part-time job. She graphed the number of hours she worked and the amount of money she earned from working. Which sentence describes the rate at which the amount of money she earned changed? A. The amount she earned increased $1 for every 10 hours she worked. B. The amount she earned increased $10 for every 1 hour she worked. C. The amount she earned increased $20 for every 1 hour she worked. D. The amount she earned increased $5 for every 1 hour she worked.

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Answer:

The correct answer is B.

Explanation:

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what is the meaning of embassy​

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Answer:

the official residence or offices of an ambassador.

Explanation:

it is the official place that an ambassador resides in

should pusillanimous acts be punished ignored or discussed

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Discussed, I mean some people just lack courage I think punishment is way to harsh, and if we just ignore them they will never change and stay stuck on that cycle of being scared

Choose all statements which accurately indicate a purpose of this portion of Socrates's speech.
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to argue that education means instilling something new in a pupil
to argue that the notion of "the good" is an innate part of a person's soul
to argue against being put to death by the authorities
to express a disbelief in the gods as popularly understood
to argue that the notion of a circle derives from man's innate sense of things

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Answer:

✔to argue that education means instilling something new in a pupil

✔to argue that the notion of "the good" is an innate part of a person's soul

✔to argue that the notion of a circle derives from man's innate sense of things.

Explanation:

The above statements accurately indicate a purpose of this portion of Socrates's speech.

From the speech, we discover that Socrates argued that education isn't something that comes from outside of a person but it is something that lies inside someone that is draw forth. He also argues that "the good" is within everyone. This means that everyone's sense of "the good" is innate or inborn.

He further argues that the issue of the circle is innate in us. He iterates that it is part of the knowledge everyone of us was born with.

The statements which indicate a purpose of the portion of Socrates's speech are:

A. to argue that education means instilling something new in a pupil.

B. to argue that the notion of “the good” is an innate part of a person's soul.

E. to argue that the notion of a circle derives from man's innate sense of things.

What is the Socrates's speech?

The symposium is a philosophical text, in which speech of many scholars s given.

Socrates', the Greek philosopher, whose speech was also in the symposium.

He told in the speech that, everything we learn throughout the life is there in our mind already.

The education just recall that knowledge.

Thus, the correct options are A, B, and E.

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Answer:

Well the chips could be a different price depending on how many bags you'll buy. Or Walmart had a major brainfart

Explanation:

So for example I could buy a soda for 3 dollars but a deal making 2 for 5 makes the deal value seem better so I'll get a better value of paying for two instead of 1. Though let's say here the chips could potentially be 2.99 pair bag and 2 will just be 5.58. That 3rd bag 8.47. It's a business move that a lot of entrepreneurs and business people do to make you pay more then what your intending to. All walmart did here is cut a couple change on the deal and still made you pay more than what you wanted to do in the first place because the value of the deal seemed better.

dont shop at walmart next time maybe

CER: Their Eyes Were Watching God
Directions: In CER format, compare and contrast Janie’s three marriages. What initially pulls her to each of the three men? How do they differ from one another? What does she learn from each experience? This will count as a TEST grade. Make sure you use evidence cited properly and sentence starters
Claim:
Evidence #1
Evidence #2
Evidence #3
Reasoning #1
Reasoning #2
Reasoning #3

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Answer:

Logan Killicks

Logan is Janie's first husband. He is unloving and too old for Janie. He treats Janie as if she were a possession like his mule. This guy actually cares about Janie in his own abusive way. Logan represents the old ways for black women, from her grandmother's time when a black woman was satisfied to play the lowest role in society.

Joe Starks

Joe is suave and ambitious. He represents a sense of freedom from Logan and her grandmother's life. Unfortunately she is treated more like a mule than Logan treated her. He represented empty dreams.

Tea Cake

Tea Cake seems to be more sensitive but he lacks direction, security and often common sense. He is sort of a character foil to Joe Starks.

Really, none of them were ideal. Each brought their own storm to Janie's life. At least Tea Cake didn't regularly abuse her but I wouldn't consider any of them "good".

The evidences are as follows:

Hunter Killicks

Janie's first spouse was Logan. He is too elderly and unloving for Janie. He treats Janie like a possession similar to his mule. In his own terrible way, this guy does care about Janie. Logan is a representation of black women's traditional roles from her grandmother's day, when they were content to fill the lowest positions in society.

Who was Joe starks?

Joe is slick and aspiring. He stands for liberation from the lives of Logan and her grandma. Unfortunately, she is treated worse than Logan did, more like a mule. He represented unfulfilled hopes.

Tea Cake

Tea Cake appears to be more sensitive, but he frequently lacks common sense, security, and direction. He kind of serves as Joe Starks' comic counterpoint.

In truth, none of them were perfect. Each caused a different tempest in Janie's life. Even while Tea Cake didn't frequently mistreat her, I wouldn't classify any of them as "good".

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Which events have changed Scrooge the most?

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Answer:

I think it was the ghosts visiting him

Answer:

The ghost of Christmas future

Explanation:

Had the greates effect on Scroige because the spirit showed Scrooge his own grave and frightened him inti changing his ways.

3) Imagine—we have two candidates with real credentials Type of sentence:​

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Answer:

exclamative

Explanation:

because it give a statement using emotion

a raisan in the sun:When Beneatha takes off her head wrap, everyone is surprised to see that she has cut her hair. How did she wear her hair before, and how is she wearing it now? Why did she make this change? How did Ruth react to her hair cut? How did Walter react? What did George, the wealthy young man whom she is dating, think about her new haircut?

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I think her hair was long and then she cut it.

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