What do you think would have made the essay more effective and why? Your answer should be 3 to 4 sentences.

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Take Another Look at Electric Cars

The average automobile driver pays $2,000 annually for gasoline. That $2,000 of gas is contributing to both the United States’ dependency on foreign countries and environmental pollution. Electric cars are beneficial for their owners and for the environment. Anybody who is buying a new car should consider purchasing an electric car.
Electric vehicles have a reputation as being expensive, but that has changed in the past few years. Purchase prices have been dropping and a federal tax credit lowers their actual cost even more. The average cost of a brand new gas automobile is approximately $31,500. Most new electric cars are priced between $30,000 and $40,000. That is a higher initial cost, but when you factor in the $7,500 federal tax credit (and possibly additional state tax credits, depending on where you live), the price becomes comparable to that of a gasoline car. The annual costs associated with owning a car are much lower with an electric car. The average driver pays about $2,000 a year for gas. The average cost of electricity for a year of driving is $500. That will save $1,500 a year in fuel. Additionally, a more modern and streamlined engine will save drivers in other maintenance fees. One government study estimated that electric-car drivers will save over 40 percent in annual maintenance fees.
One of the biggest arguments against electric cars has been their limited range. Electric cars do have a shorter range, but that range is plenty for most drivers. The majority of American drivers travel less than 35 miles a day, and the average electric car has a range of about 100 miles on a full charge. Charging the car at home each night will provide enough power for daily driving and allow drivers to save time by avoiding stops at the gas station. And, as the number of electric cars on the road increases, more businesses and employers will install charging stations for their customers and employees, which will make charging a vehicle even easier.
An electric car may not be for everyone, but they have evolved beyond their original restrictions. With a purchase price that is comparable to a gas car, and reduced fuel and maintenance fees, anyone who is purchasing a new car should seriously consider an electric car. Spread the word, and check out an electric car today.

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What I think that would have made the essay more effective is the use of more emotion and flow. This is because the essay does not explain more in depth of why this problem needs to be fixed. It is also because, the essay does not have transition words.

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Make a list of what you will say to build on your claim. Include two reasons, a way to address a counterclaim, and a conclusion.
Writing an Argument that Supports the Characteristics of a Role Model

From whose point of view does the reader learn the most about Flint’s treasure? (treasure island)

Jim
Dr. Livesey
John Silver
Captain Smollett

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1.
What causes Anne's mood to change from one day to the next?
the mood of their helpers
the activities in the Annex
her own thoughts
the progress of the war
2.
What point of view should you use when writing a reflective essay?
third-person point of view, which uses he or she to refer to the narrator
omniscient point of view, which uses he or she to refer to the narrator
first-person point of view, which uses I to refer to the narrator
second-person point of view, which uses you to refer to the narrator
3.
If your goal in a reflective essay were to explain why certain events happened, what kind of organizational pattern would you use?
chronological order
cause-and-effect order
problem-solution order
comparison/contrast order
4.
What can you do to keep your reflective essay focused and headed in the right direction? (Select all correct answers.)
Carefully describe in great detail everyone who makes up your story.
Select descriptive details that further your story line and help your readers visualize it.
Offer reflections on several incidents in your life that taught you important lessons.
Provide just enough background, or context, to help your reader understand the story.
5.
Which detail in the following sentence appeals to the sense of sight? It was Larry who responded, monkeying his way down from the top of the slide to snatch the Gobstoppers from me.
responded
Larry
down
monkeying

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Okay, I have to have a 500-750 word essay on political, racial, gender/sexuality bias in the media. Could someone help me with NOTES AND/OR POSSIBLE SITES? NOT the WRITING of the essay, only sites and/or notes, please.
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After ms.whatsit transforms her self what animal is she

Tell about a time where you were embarrassed, scared, or made a mistake. (write a page)

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Of all the content we have learned so far, take a moment to describe, in your own words (in the form of a short paragraph), something you have found particularly interesting, sad, or disgusting about the Holocaust. Use at least 2 of the vocab words from the word bank in your reflection. ( this is about the holocaust) these are the vocab words (Holocaust, Concentration Camp, Nazi, Jews, Antisemitism)

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Giving up is like
Need this for the start of an essay and explain how

You have read the poem “Susan B. Anthony.” Based on the poem, why do people consider Susan B. Anthony to be an inspiration? Use details from the poem to support your answer.


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Can someone write me a 5 paragraph essay of why we should get vaccinated.
Please do not write random answers i will report you
IM NOT ASKING YOUR OPINION JUST ANSWER THE QUESTION
1- Introduction
2- Body/ reasoning
3- Body/ reasoning
4- Body/ reasoning
5- Conclusion

Why should use helmets for bikes, skateboards, etc? Why is wearing seatbelts important? Why is it important to have safety rules when swimming? Why is playground safety important? Why is reading to keep your brain active important?

At least 2 sentences for each please

Which of these passages includes an example of an analogy?

1. The sun set amid the paper-thin clouds that slowly changed colors from bright pinks and greens to purple. Finally, everything faded to gray as the sun vanished behind the hills.
2. The walls were covered in blue paint that was the same color as the sky on a cloudless day.
3. I chose way too challenging a slope for a beginning skier. I was like Wile E. Coyote running off the edge of a cliff, hovering in thin air, and then plummeting to the ground.
4. The piano wheezed like an old horse. Enjoying the noise, the two children banged on the keys even harder and drowned out their parents' cries for them to stop.

Menomonee Falls-based War Dogs will do just about anything to spread the word about a little-known part of American military history. What figure of speech is used in the above sentence?

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Part A

Based on the details in "'Equal Justice Under Law': Thurgood Marshall," what can be inferred about how children responded to segregation?


A. Because they had other transportation options, black and white children refused to ride on segregated buses.

B. Most children were unaffected because their parents won lawsuits to end segregation.

C. Unlike the adults around them, black and white children were more accepting of one another.

D. Most children adopted their parents' attitudes about race.

Part B

Which evidence from the text best supports the answer to Part A?


A. “'They separate and go to different schools,' he said, 'and they come out and they play together.'”

B. "The children said the white dolls were 'nice' and 'pretty.'”

C. "The parents took the all-white school board to court, hoping to win a decent education for their children."

D. "White children rode buses to modern brick schools with libraries and playgrounds."

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The value of a boat is $50,000 and it depreciates at a rate of 25% per year. Which of the following is a function that models this situation?

c
f(x)= 50,000(0.75)x

d
f(x)= 50,000 - 12,500x

In this unit, you analyzed literary texts to create a literary analysis essay and a multimedia presentation. Analyzing a literary text can help you develop a deeper understanding of the text. You can learn more about the characters, the plot, the theme, and the author.

Think of a story that you enjoyed reading but wanted to learn more about. Explain why you would like to learn more about this particular story. What information would you research? How would you conduct your research?

Read the following excerpt from "The White Umbrella.

Lots of people's mothers work "
Those are American people," | said.
"So what do you think we are? I can do the pledge of allegiance with my eyes closed." Nevertheless, she tried to be discreet and if my mother wasn't home by 5:30 we would start cooking by ourselves."

What does the quote reveal about the narrator?

A. The narrator doesn't like to cook
B. The narrator doesn't consider herself to be like other Americans
C. The narrator wishes her mother taught piano lessons
D. The narrator questions her mother's ability to say the pledge of allegiance.​

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What is a central idea in the Newsela article "Dream Jobs: Investigative Reporter"?

difference between habitat disruption and habitat destruction
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Just the name itself will make you giggle. It's a great word that conjures visions of slime and unpleasantness. It is perhaps the most annoying part of having a cold or allergies. Mucus, however, plays a very important role in defense of our bodies and our health. In fact, it's high time mucus got a lot more respect.
First, there are some amazing facts about mucus that are worthy of respect. Humans produce about a liter of mucus every day, whether they are sick or not. Bony fish and some invertebrates (snails or slugs) also have mucus cells on the outside of their body. This external mucus creates a protective coating that prevents predators' toxins from doing harm. Humans produce mucus to protect our stomachs, our lungs, and several other systems.
We tend to not like mucus because it is a considered a symptom or sign that something is wrong. We usually only see it when we are sick, and so we tend to dislike it. According to Michael M. Johns, III, MD, however, "mucus is incredibly important for our bodies." Johns, an assistant professor at Emory University, calls mucus "the oil in the engine" of our bodies. Without mucus, our engines, or bodies, would freeze up and stop working properly.
Furthermore, mucus is not just the nasty gunk you see when you are sick. It lines the tissues in your mouth, your nose, throat, and lungs. It also is crucial in protecting your digestive system. Mucus puts a protective coating over the surfaces of these tissues, keeping them moist. Most of the time we don't notice mucus is making our lives better. It does its job quietly, making everything run smoothly, keeping our inner tissues soft and flexible enough to fight off invaders.
Occasionally, though our mucus-making membranes go into overdrive. If you eat a hot pepper, your mucus membranes in your mouth and throat start producing extra mucus to protect you. If you come into contact with pollen, you may get a runny nose and start sneezing and coughing. When these things happen, your mucus systems start making more fluids to wash away the irritating particles. Mucus also has some antibodies that increase our ability to fight off bacteria and viruses.
It's hard to appreciate what is essentially slime, but we have mucus for some very good reasons. It helps to keep us healthy and lets us know when our bodies are under attack. We would be wise to respect what our bodies do to keep us safe. So the next time you find yourself reaching for a tissue, remember mucus is your friend and ally.



What's in a Name?

Mucus is a great word, not only because it gives name to an important bodily function, but also because it is one of those words that simultaneously makes you feel grossed-out and giggly. Other words for this powerfully important human-health tool include slime and phlegm. Slang words for mucus include boogers and snot. All of these words have the same giggle-power, simply from the combination of consonants and vowels. By the way, mucus is an old word; it's been around since the mid-1600s and has roots back to Latin (mucere, to be moldy or musty) and Greek (myxa, mucus). While you may assume that words like snot and boogers are relatively new slang terms, they are not. Snot dates to 1560 and comes from an Old English word, gesnot, and has the same root as the word snout. The word booger is not quite as old but has been in use since the 1890s.

Which word describes both texts?

a. Doubtful
b. Informative
c. Passionate
d. Sympathetic

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Which of the following words shows a correct plural form?

A.) Stereos

B.) Shampooes

C.) Echos

D.) Mosquitos

What is the main idea of this text. When one hears the term "reality" applied to a show, one might expect that the events portrayed occurred naturally or, at the least, were not scripted. This is not always the case. Many reality shows occur in unreal environments, like rented mansions occupied by film crews. Such living environments do not reflect what most people understand to be "reality." Worse, there have been accusations that events not captured on film were later restaged by producers. Worse still, some involved in the production of "reality" television claim that the participants were urged to act out story lines premeditated by producers. With such accusations floating around, it's no wonder many people take reality TV to be about as real as the sitcom.

In what ways will the human race evolve in the next thousand years?