PLZ HELP ASAP

Does anyone have any advise on how to make this essay any better

Answer:

In the last sentence of the first paragraph, you use the contraction don't twice. If this is an essay i advise you not use that. (even though that rule gets me every. single. time.) Plus it would add to the formal tone you have throughout your essay.

in the second sentence you say peoples, i would suggest you say instead, "the evidence that other people have behind this claim . . ."

i would also suggest that you add evidence of other writers that did better than bob dylan and point out what they had that he did not.

Overall it sounds really good. I am sorry that i do not know much about this topic, so i can't give you super specific things that you could add, but i hope this helps. Anyway, good luck, have a good day, and be tiger fierce!! :)

Answer:

hope you pass bud! ps im the one who said the trick

Explanation:

Read the excerpt from Lena's paper on "A Shield."

Based on the phrases "I am wounded with iron" and "I have witnessed much fighting," the shield in the poem must be an old shield carried by a seasoned warrior.

In her statement, Lena is

analyzing the historical impact of the text.
assessing the use of alliteration in the text.
studying the development of language in the text.
supporting an inference with evidence from the text.

Can someone help me

What is the implicit mind and how does it relate to bias ?​

In the 1800s, the United States was still a very young nation, trying to solidify its identity. The Industrial Revolution began in Great Britain, a fast development of society following the introduction of machines. The United States was slower than Great Britain to fully embrace the changes. Yet key technological developments caused a rapid growth in American urban areas. Better farming methods and tools in the 1800s increased food production. Americans were able to grow enough food for their families as well as to sell. The abundance caused food prices to fall. The expansion of cotton and the growth of textile factories in northern states helped produce the first wave of American industry. More people turned to work in northern factories as a way to support their families. Thousands of immigrants to the United States also settled in or near port cities, looking for work. Even today, the need for work is a common reason people move to urban areas. As a result, cities grew in numbers of people and physical space. As more people and businesses moved in, they needed buildings for living and working. They needed ways to move around the city. We call this process urbanization. In 1820, the United States had only a few cities of 10,000 residents or more. About seven percent of U.S. residents lived in urban areas. The number of cities with more than 10,000 people grew quickly over the next 40 years, especially in the Northeast and Midwest. By 1860, about 20 percent lived in cities. Philadelphia and New York City were the most populated cities in 1860 and would soon reach one million residents. The urbanization of the United States quickened due to technology improvements. Without innovations in food production, the factories could not have grown so quickly. The trend quickened after 1860 and continued throughout the 21st century as well. By 2007, more Americans lived in or near cities than they did in rural areas.

Select a sentence from the body of this article that can be removed without affecting the author's explanation. Place the text in quotes and explain why it is an unnecessary detail.

Which quote from the text lacks support for the author's claims about teenagers and sleep?
A. "It is so hard for teenagers to wake up early for school."
B. "Young people are simply more likely to have accidents if they drive while they are tired."
C. "They talk or text on the phone and play computer games instead of going to sleep."
D. "These schools stress that sleeping is an important biological function."​

Read the excerpt from "On Becoming an Inventor" by Dean Kamen. When I was twelve years old and Barton, my older brother, was around fifteen, we took over the family basement. At first, I made a darkroom for developing pictures, and Bart was using it as his lab where he was raising about one hundred white rats, removing their thymus glands, and trying to figure out the glands' dysfunction. He wanted pictures taken of his experiment, doing the surgery on rats, and since I already had a darkroom, I took the pictures, though somewhat reluctantly. I didn't like the blood. Which part of the excerpt expresses an opinion? we took over . . . I made a darkroom for developing pictures . . . he was raising about one hundred white rats . . . I didn't like the blood.

Many years ago, the house had been sold to pay off the family's farming debts.

This line is an example of which of the following? (1 point)

a
Backstory
b
Conflict
c
Plot
d
Setting

On the ranch in Steinbeck’s novella "Of Mice And Men", which could be described as "a world often ruled by the dollar and what it can buy," how exactly does "friendship, like love, open other vistas"? What is the relationship between friendship and dreams?

Once upon a time in a land over the sea, there lived a girl
named Samantha. She was a pretty girl with a good heart,
Though her cruel stepmother did everything in her power
to make her miserable, Samantha always hoped she would
one day meet a kind man and live a happy life.
Which best explains why an author would include this passage as part of the
exposition of a story?

Read the following Henry David Thoreau quotes from Walden why does that the quote most appeal to you and explain why.

“Say what you have to say, not what you ought. Any truth is better than make-believe”

Define "Cue" plz ASAP

Which word meaning "old" has the most positive connotation

ANSWER THIS ASAP PLZ
What is an antecedent?

1. A word or phrase in a sentence that is replaced by a pronoun.
2. A word that replaces an earlier noun in the sentence.
3. The person or object that s acted up on by a verb
4. The word that completes the verb.

Sear Seart Sease Nike sine、ios​

Why do you think journalists need to be on the scene of the news?

i’ll mark brainliest!

The central idea HAS TO relate to everyone.
True or False?

PLS ANSWER FAST WILL GIVE BRAILEST

Write {more smoothly, most smoothly} in a sentence

Can someone help me with the exiting verbs and the middle part finish each sentence by adding a predicate. Thank you.

Does studying too much at the same time make it hard for your brain to process the information?

1. Create 2 debatable claims of your own.
2. Create 2 non-debatable claims of your own.

Can someone help me and I’ll give you a Brainly

The m <2 =25, find the m <1

Highlight text formatting and punctuation marks that signal that the reader should change tone. It was an unbelievably detailed dream: the bike had a purple metallic finish and was parked next to the wine cabinet. He even knew the sequence of the combination lock: 12345. He couldn't forget that now, could he? Well, in the middle of the night, still woozy with sleep, he staggered down to the basement in his pajamas, and what did he find next to the wine cabinet? A dead mouse. That was a low blow! —The Number Devil, Hans Magnus Enzenberger Which kind of punctuation tells the reader to end the sentence with a higher tone of voice? a question mark an exclamation point a period a comma

JUST DO B. DONT DO A!!(This is what it says)
*explore the word family for the base word HONEST. complete each sentence with the correct word*
this would be very much appreciated if someone did this for me ty<3

HURRYY!!!!!! I NEED HELP PLS! Which types of descriptive language are used in the excerpt?
Read the excerpt from “The Lady, or the Tiger?”

In the very olden time there lived a semi-barbaric king, whose ideas, though somewhat polished and sharpened by the progressiveness of distant Latin neighbors, were still large, florid, and untrammeled, as became the half of him which was barbaric.

Which types of descriptive language are used in the excerpt?

A). metaphor and hyperbole
B). strong verbs and simile
C). sensory details and precise adjectives
D). precise adjectives and strong verbs

Which of the following best describes a conflict between what the daughters think and what they do? A. They think they're busy, but they don't actually do anything. B. They think they're being sympathetic to each other, but they really hurt each others' feelings. C. They think they're mourning their father, but they actually celebrate. D. They think they're charming, but they're rude to guests.

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What is Situational Irony? PUT THE DEFINTION IN YOUR OWN WORDS (NOT FROM ANY WEBSITE)

Read the excerpt from Wonder.

I know I'm not an ordinary ten-year-old kid. I mean, sure, I do ordinary things. I eat ice cream. I ride my bike. I play ball. Stuff like that makes me ordinary. I guess. And I feel ordinary. Inside. But I know ordinary kids don't make other ordinary kids run away screaming in playgrounds. I know ordinary kids don't get stared at wherever they go.

Which best explains why this excerpt is an effective hook for a trailer?

It reveals important details about the plot.
It entices readers by solving a major conflict.
It reveals why the narrator feels self-conscious.
It entices readers by introducing a conflict.

1. Explain in your own words what 2FA is and how it protects users against phishing
attacks.